tpo 21 the genetically modified trees
The material discusses the concept of genetically modified trees. While the reading looks at the topic from one perspective, the listening challenges certain points outlined in the reading topic.
Firstly, the reading details specific points regarding this topic, namely genetically modifies trees are most likely to survive and stand any harsh condition. Next, genetically modifies tress can grow faster, so they have crucial economic benefits. Finally, the genetically modified trees can protect the wild trees from overexploitation.
Conversely, the listening challenges the points, one specific contradiction is the genetically modified tress are uniform, so if they exposed to a particular condition, which they are not designed for. They all will completely wiped out. However, the nature trees are genetically diverse; to put it in another way, some trees could be killed under certain condition. While other individuals are resistance. In addition to that, the genetically modified trees have no financial benefits, given that companies will charge farmers more for planting modified seeds; moreover, farmers will pay companies every time they plant these seeds. One final point, the modified trees could not protect the local wide trees, because they grow very aggressively, they compete with the nature tress for resources; such as water and sunlight. Therefore, they affect the growth the nature trees.
In summary, there are obvious discrepancies in the presented information.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 228, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'wipe'
Suggestion: wipe
... designed for. They all will completely wiped out. However, the nature trees are gene...
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Line 3, column 368, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ould be killed under certain condition. While other individuals are resistance. In ad...
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Line 4, column 76, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...repancies in the presented information.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, finally, first, firstly, however, if, look, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, while, in addition, in summary, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.4613686534 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 5.04856512141 139% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 7.30242825607 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 12.0772626932 25% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 22.412803532 58% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 30.3222958057 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 5.01324503311 160% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1272.0 1373.03311258 93% => OK
No of words: 222.0 270.72406181 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.72972972973 5.08290768461 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 4.04702891845 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8341317141 2.5805825403 110% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 145.348785872 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612612612613 0.540411800872 113% => OK
syllable_count: 393.3 419.366225166 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.55342163355 116% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.25165562914 240% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0662251656 99% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 21.2450331126 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 61.6483634013 49.2860985944 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.8461538462 110.228320801 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0769230769 21.698381199 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0769230769 7.06452816374 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.421725643886 0.272083759551 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.149429347266 0.0996497079465 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111759182061 0.0662205650399 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210574736171 0.162205337803 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.166393210643 0.0443174109184 375% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.3589403974 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 53.8541721854 69% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.0289183223 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.66 12.2367328918 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.42419426049 105% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 63.6247240618 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.7273730684 84% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.498013245 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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