The reading passage and listening passage both discuss Genetic Modification which is change in organism gene and characteristics.
The author believes that it is harder than natural trees. The lecturer casts doubt on the claims made in article. she thinks that every modified tree will die But natural trees some are resistant and will survive.
Moreover, the lecturer states that they are uniform and do not change to grow,for example with climate change they will all die simultaneously .The author rebuts this argument by telling artificial trees grow faster and are economically more beneficial.
Finally, the lecturer mentions that the trees will compete. she is of the opinion that his is the reason of more competition for sun light and they will minimize growth of other trees.The author,on the other hand,states that we can prevent overexplotion of forests and wild trees.
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Essay evaluation report
which is change in organism gene and characteristics.
which is to change in organism gene and characteristics.
which is a change in organism gene and characteristics.
flaws:
No. of Words: 145 250
Minimum 150 words wanted. need one more argument. The correct pattern:
para 1: introduction
para 2: doubt 1
para 3: doubt 2
para 4: doubt 3
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 17 in 30
Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 5 12
No. of Words: 145 250
No. of Characters: 724 1200
No. of Different Words: 88 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.47 4.2
Average Word Length: 4.993 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.566 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 53 80
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 38 60
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 20 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 10 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 29 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 14.478 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.6 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.494 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.746 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.186 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 3 4
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 58, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...s that it is harder than natural trees. The lecturer casts doubt on the claims made...
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Line 2, column 114, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: She
...ts doubt on the claims made in article. she thinks that every modified tree will di...
^^^
Line 4, column 78, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , for
...ey are uniform and do not change to grow,for example with climate change they will a...
^^^^
Line 4, column 143, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... change they will all die simultaneously .The author rebuts this argument by telli...
^^
Line 4, column 145, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...hange they will all die simultaneously .The author rebuts this argument by telling ...
^^^
Line 6, column 61, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: She
...r mentions that the trees will compete. she is of the opinion that his is the reaso...
^^^
Line 6, column 185, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...hey will minimize growth of other trees.The author,on the other hand,states that we...
^^^
Line 6, column 195, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , on
...inimize growth of other trees.The author,on the other hand,states that we can preve...
^^^
Line 6, column 213, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , states
...other trees.The author,on the other hand,states that we can prevent overexplotion of fo...
^^^^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'finally', 'if', 'moreover', 'so', 'for example', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.25641025641 0.261695866417 98% => OK
Verbs: 0.160256410256 0.158904122519 101% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0961538461538 0.0723426182421 133% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0384615384615 0.0435111971325 88% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0512820512821 0.0277247811725 185% => OK
Prepositions: 0.121794871795 0.128828473217 95% => OK
Participles: 0.0192307692308 0.0370669169778 52% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.74349856333 2.5805825403 106% => OK
Infinitives: 0.00641025641026 0.0208969081088 31% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00154638098197 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0961538461538 0.128158765124 75% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0384615384615 0.0158828679856 242% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00641025641026 0.0114777025283 56% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 886.0 1645.83664459 54% => OK
No of words: 141.0 271.125827815 52% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.28368794326 6.08160592843 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.44591672665 4.04852973271 85% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.404255319149 0.374372842146 108% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.297872340426 0.287516216867 104% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.198581560284 0.187439937562 106% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0992907801418 0.113142543107 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74349856333 2.5805825403 106% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 145.348785872 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.652482269504 0.539623497131 121% => OK
Word variations: 59.7982639357 53.8517498576 111% => OK
How many sentences: 7.0 13.0529801325 54% => OK
Sentence length: 20.1428571429 21.7502111507 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.5737239727 49.3711431718 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.571428571 132.220823453 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1428571429 21.7502111507 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 0.878197800319 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 3.39072847682 265% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 49.9300911854 50.5018328374 99% => OK
Elegance: 1.58974358974 1.90840788429 83% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.470832197833 0.549887131256 86% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.114455481775 0.142949733639 80% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0748748402733 0.0787303798458 95% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.727712366526 0.631733273073 115% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.224558379593 0.139662658121 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.222098770389 0.266732575781 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0787491103525 0.103435571967 76% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.210915566366 0.414875509568 51% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0641649239414 0.0530846634433 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.280052824855 0.40443939384 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0780458146055 0.0528353158467 148% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.26048565121 47% => OK
Positive topic words: 1.0 3.49668874172 29% => More positive topic words wanted.
Negative topic words: 3.0 3.62251655629 83% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 3.1766004415 63% => OK
Total topic words: 6.0 10.2958057395 58% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Minimum 200 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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