The reading argues that merits of using ethanol fuel can not outweigh gasoline and raises three specific reasons.
On the contrary, The lecturer believes that ethanol fuel can be the alternative energy of gasoline
and challenge the three reasons that raised by the reading.
Firstly, The reading avers that similar to gasoline, ethanol also produces greenhouse gases.
While the professor agrees with this statement, he annotates that growing plants that the ingredients of ethanol contribute to decreasing carbon dioxide.
Secondly, The passage asserts that the production of inordinate amounts of ethanol will cause the shortage of animal feeds.
This point is opposed by the speaker by explaining that the plant which is used to produce ethanol does not apply as animal feeds. Therefore, animal feeds will be able to obtain enough amounts to grow livestock.
Thirdly, Thirdly, The author expresses that ethanol fuel will never be cheap as well as gasoline.
The speaker disproves this concept.Currently, the price of ethanol fuel cannot compete with gasoline without the support of the government.
However, if the production of ethanol fuel increases, production will increase further and ethanol fuel will be cheaper.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, well, while, as well as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.4613686534 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 5.04856512141 158% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 7.30242825607 41% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 22.412803532 58% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 30.3222958057 69% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1050.0 1373.03311258 76% => OK
No of words: 189.0 270.72406181 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55555555556 5.08290768461 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 4.04702891845 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69654463817 2.5805825403 104% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 145.348785872 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.540411800872 103% => OK
syllable_count: 317.7 419.366225166 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.55342163355 109% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 13.0662251656 77% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 21.2450331126 85% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.7307500897 49.2860985944 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 105.0 110.228320801 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9 21.698381199 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.9 7.06452816374 183% => OK
Paragraphs: 10.0 4.09492273731 244% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.411693226954 0.272083759551 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.171015205753 0.0996497079465 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.058784031695 0.0662205650399 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16890907518 0.162205337803 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0730823722883 0.0443174109184 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.3589403974 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 53.8541721854 83% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.0289183223 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.2367328918 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.42419426049 114% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 63.6247240618 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.498013245 88% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.2008830022 134% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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