The ethanol fule is the promising alternative of the gasoline. The professor give three resons in support of the ethanol fule against the claims explained in the reading passage.
Although ethanol produces carbon dioxide when it burns as well as gasoline it shouldn't cause to increase earth temprature same as gasoline. The reason is behinde the generation process of the ethanol fuel. The ethanol fuel is based on plants and so the generated amount of carbon dioxide may consume by thoes plants. therefore the ethanol fuel dosen't have global warming effect such as gasoline.
In reading passage the auther mentioned about the food shortage problem for animals in the consequence of ethanol fuel production but, according to the professor, the ethanol made by selliose which is not consumed by the animals.
the last problem mentioned in the passage is about the price of ethanol fuel. However the cost of the generation of ethanol fuel is more than gasoline and it needs the government support but with the improvment of ethanol usage by the people its price will become lower because the mass production of that can support its initial investments.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 78, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'gives'.
Suggestion: gives
...ernative of the gasoline. The professor give three resons in support of the ethanol ...
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Line 3, column 79, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: shouldn't
...de when it burns as well as gasoline it shouldnt cause to increase earth temprature same...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 94, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'increasing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'cause' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: increasing
...s as well as gasoline it shouldnt cause to increase earth temprature same as gasoline. The ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 318, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Therefore
...on dioxide may consume by thoes plants. therefore the ethanol fuel dosent have global war...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 318, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: therefore,
...on dioxide may consume by thoes plants. therefore the ethanol fuel dosent have global war...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...hich is not consumed by the animals. the last problem mentioned in the passage i...
^^^
Line 7, column 79, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...age is about the price of ethanol fuel. However the cost of the generation of ethanol f...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, may, so, therefore, well, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.4613686534 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 7.30242825607 55% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 12.0772626932 25% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 22.412803532 27% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 30.3222958057 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 970.0 1373.03311258 71% => OK
No of words: 190.0 270.72406181 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10526315789 5.08290768461 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 4.04702891845 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54606317147 2.5805825403 99% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 145.348785872 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547368421053 0.540411800872 101% => OK
syllable_count: 311.4 419.366225166 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 3.25607064018 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.23620309051 73% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 13.0662251656 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 21.2450331126 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.8946234172 49.2860985944 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.777777778 110.228320801 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1111111111 21.698381199 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.55555555556 7.06452816374 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 4.19205298013 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.423416861659 0.272083759551 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.194951791139 0.0996497079465 196% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453020235294 0.0662205650399 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.251477249121 0.162205337803 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0748541791409 0.0443174109184 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.3589403974 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.8541721854 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.0289183223 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.2367328918 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.42419426049 101% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 63.6247240618 72% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.7273730684 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.498013245 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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