The reading and the lecture are about the finding of some fossils of some type of dinosaurs. The author of the reading thinks it is the remains of tissue of the animals that contain sings of blood cells. The lecturer, on the other hand, casts doubt on the this claims. He provides three reasons for elaboration as follows.
First, the article argues that there is hollows inside the bones that contain a soft substance consists of organic substance. He thinks that this substance represents the remains of the blood cells. The lecturer, on the other hand, rejects this claim. He elaborates by stating that the soft substance is likely to be the organic residues left because of the activity of the bacteria inside this holes.
Second, the text contends that microscope examination showed reddish remains which is likely to be a sign of the existence of the red blood cells. The professor, in contrast, provides different explanation by mentioning that the reddish remains are likely the remains of some red minerals. He explains that they have found this red material in the fossil of other preemptive animals that do not contain red blood cells which eliminate the possibility that they are remains of red blood cells.
Third, the author of the reading says that they have found the collagen inside the bones and exist only in tissues. However, the lecturer rebuts this supposition by providing scientific fact that the collagen does not live for more than 100.000 years, but the tissue are much older than that. That is a proof that this substance is not collagen, and it may be the remains of more recent source. For example, the skin of the researchers could the source of this substance.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 205, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...mals that contain sings of blood cells. The lecturer, on the other hand, casts doub...
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Line 1, column 253, Rule ID: DT_DT[2]
Message: Maybe you need to remove the second determiner so that only 'the' or 'this' is left.
Suggestion: the; this
...urer, on the other hand, casts doubt on the this claims. He provides three reasons for e...
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Line 3, column 32, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[3]
Message: Did you mean 'there are hollows'?
Suggestion: there are hollows
...ows. First, the article argues that there is hollows inside the bones that contain a soft su...
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Line 3, column 391, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... of the activity of the bacteria inside this holes. Second, the text contends tha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, second, so, third, for example, in contrast, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.4613686534 124% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 7.30242825607 55% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 17.0 12.0772626932 141% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 22.412803532 143% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 30.3222958057 115% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.01324503311 219% => Less nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1413.0 1373.03311258 103% => OK
No of words: 289.0 270.72406181 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8892733564 5.08290768461 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.04702891845 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44616855841 2.5805825403 95% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 145.348785872 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.453287197232 0.540411800872 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 423.0 419.366225166 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.116997792494 0% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 21.2450331126 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6679389128 49.2860985944 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.2 110.228320801 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2666666667 21.698381199 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.13333333333 7.06452816374 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 4.33554083885 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.27373068433 304% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.362137853883 0.272083759551 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116823993043 0.0996497079465 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0859589213043 0.0662205650399 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206791879295 0.162205337803 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0680377104229 0.0443174109184 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.3589403974 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 53.8541721854 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.0289183223 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.2367328918 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.42419426049 93% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 63.6247240618 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.7273730684 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.498013245 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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