In the given set of materials, the main topic is centered on whether the T.rex dinosaur, had blood vessel or not. While the author has focused on its presence on T.rex dinosaur by its leg bone examination, the speaker in the follow-up material cast doubt on those points by providing the evidence and justifications.
The first point in the article is that based on the scrutinizing, a soft organic substance inside the hollow was the indicator for blood cell existence. However, this was questioned by the professor as he stated that bacteria colonization might produce some substances which only were similar to the blood cell appearance.
Moreover, according to the essay, the iron- content sphere in the T.rex leg bone resembled to the appearance and size of red blood cell for the same function. However, the speaker discussed that researchers perceived that it probably was the residue of red mineral piece with consideration in the other primitive fossils.
Last but not least, the writer has mentioned that experiments on the bone of the T.rex dinosaur substantiated the existence of collagen, a main substance of alive bone. Conversely, according to the orator, it was considered as conflict with the previous knowledge about the lifelong of collagen and it might be the skin-collagen of experimenter.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'conversely', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'moreover', 'so', 'while']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.287553648069 0.261695866417 110% => OK
Verbs: 0.124463519313 0.158904122519 78% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0772532188841 0.0723426182421 107% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0386266094421 0.0435111971325 89% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0257510729614 0.0277247811725 93% => OK
Prepositions: 0.158798283262 0.128828473217 123% => OK
Participles: 0.0472103004292 0.0370669169778 127% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.97862072871 2.5805825403 115% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0171673819742 0.0208969081088 82% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00154638098197 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.150214592275 0.128158765124 117% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00858369098712 0.0158828679856 54% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00429184549356 0.0114777025283 37% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1319.0 1645.83664459 80% => OK
No of words: 213.0 271.125827815 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.19248826291 6.08160592843 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 4.04852973271 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.347417840376 0.374372842146 93% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.300469483568 0.287516216867 105% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.244131455399 0.187439937562 130% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.173708920188 0.113142543107 154% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97862072871 2.5805825403 115% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 145.348785872 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591549295775 0.539623497131 110% => OK
Word variations: 57.3872789327 53.8517498576 107% => OK
How many sentences: 8.0 13.0529801325 61% => OK
Sentence length: 26.625 21.7502111507 122% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.5942259886 49.3711431718 48% => OK
Chars per sentence: 164.875 132.220823453 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.625 21.7502111507 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 0.878197800319 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 3.39072847682 0% => OK
Readability: 56.6719483568 50.5018328374 112% => OK
Elegance: 2.61363636364 1.90840788429 137% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.730962238121 0.549887131256 133% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.197437448406 0.142949733639 138% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0254751824862 0.0787303798458 32% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.788007614934 0.631733273073 125% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.045998591014 0.139662658121 33% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.441171733161 0.266732575781 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0901642845052 0.103435571967 87% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.4793601128 0.414875509568 116% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0613341684926 0.0530846634433 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.549291485513 0.40443939384 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.079900302785 0.0528353158467 151% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.26048565121 94% => OK
Positive topic words: 2.0 3.49668874172 57% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 3.62251655629 28% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 1.0 3.1766004415 31% => OK
Total topic words: 4.0 10.2958057395 39% => More topic words wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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