TPO 29
whit this set of materials, both the reading passage and lecture discuss the possibility of the migration of one kind of the dinasours which is named Edmontosaurus. While the reading passage firmly states that the must have migrated to warmer territories in winter in order to survive, the proffesor casts doubt on this hypothesis.
Firstly, the lecturer avers that Edmontosaurus did not have to migrate to find the food beacuse this region used to has warmer in the and it had sunshine in the whole summer. So, the plants have had a plenty of time to grow in the summer. As a result, there was a a lot of nutrition material for them in the winter. Conversly, the article mentions in this region there would have been no plants growing during the cold seasons so these dinaosaurs must have migrated for finding food.
Moreover, The professor concurs with the fact that edmontosaurus would have lived in herd But it does not neseccery means they would have migrated. He remarks that animals live in the herd due to many reasons such as extra protection agains predators. For instance, rosvelt elk which lives in the forests of the united states live in the herd due to this reason. On the other hand, the text contends that the edmontosaurus live in the herd due to migrating.
Finally, the professor says that all of the dinosaurs in the herd were not adult and there were some juvenile Edmontosaurus among the herd. So, it was hard for them to migrate such a long distance and they could not survive. In the contrary, the essay claims the edmontosaurus had the ability to move such a distance to reach the warm regions.
- TPO 24 - Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?One of the best ways that parents can help their teenage children prepare for adult life is to encourage them to take a part-time job.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 68
- tpo 28 60
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? If people have the opportunity to get a secure job, they should take it right away rather than wait for a job that would be more satisfying. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 60
- TPO 23 60
- TPO 21 65
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Whit
whit this set of materials, both the reading...
^^^^
Line 5, column 117, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'have'.
Suggestion: have
...nd the food beacuse this region used to has warmer in the and it had sunshine in th...
^^^
Line 5, column 263, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: a
...w in the summer. As a result, there was a a lot of nutrition material for them in t...
^^^
Line 5, column 263, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...w in the summer. As a result, there was a a lot of nutrition material for them in...
^
Line 5, column 263, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'a' or 'a' is left.
Suggestion: a; a
...w in the summer. As a result, there was a a lot of nutrition material for them in t...
^^^
Line 13, column 34, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
.... Finally, the professor says that all of the dinosaurs in the herd were not adult an...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, moreover, so, while, for instance, kind of, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.4613686534 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 5.04856512141 119% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 7.30242825607 68% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 12.0772626932 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 22.412803532 89% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 30.3222958057 129% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.01324503311 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1351.0 1373.03311258 98% => OK
No of words: 285.0 270.72406181 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74035087719 5.08290768461 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.04702891845 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57539079262 2.5805825403 100% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 145.348785872 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522807017544 0.540411800872 97% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 419.366225166 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0662251656 99% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 21.2450331126 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8585975455 49.2860985944 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.923076923 110.228320801 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9230769231 21.698381199 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.69230769231 7.06452816374 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 4.19205298013 143% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.27373068433 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.334912465899 0.272083759551 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113822728176 0.0996497079465 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0500258039681 0.0662205650399 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186195391317 0.162205337803 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.041726437303 0.0443174109184 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.3589403974 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 53.8541721854 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.0289183223 93% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 12.2367328918 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.42419426049 100% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 63.6247240618 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.7273730684 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.498013245 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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