TPO 29, Integrated
The reading states that large dinosaur like edmomtosaurus live millions years ago in herds and they migrate to south in winter. However the lecturer doesn't believe this and she said that the reasons of the essay are not convincing.
First, the article claims that the edmontosaurs' diet let them to migrate. because they live on plant food which in the arctic area in winter they should migrate to south to find food.In contrasty, the lecturer said in 100 million years ago the wether in arctic was warmer. Specialy in the 24 hours day in summer, a lot of plant flourish and make a huge food resorvoir for dinosaurs even as dead plant in the winter. Then, edmontasours didi not need to migrate.
Second, the article states that finding of foddils of dinasour prove that they live in herd. it bring this as a reason that they could migrate easier in herd and compare with some contemporary animals which lilve in herd and migrate such as boffalo. On the other hand the professor reject this reassoning and disprove this evidence by sainy that living in herd is not equal to migration as some animal like rosvelt elk lilve in herd and does not migrat at all.
Third, athe article avers that this edmontasors can walk as fast as it needs to migrate. Hoever, the professor reject this by questioning that if the juvenile of dinasoursa could walk as adult or no. she said that young dinasour aoudl not move as fast as the adult and they decrease the speed fo the herd, hence the herd could not reach their destination in south in time.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: However,
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...o south in winter. However the lecturer doesnt believe this and she said that the reas...
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... edmontosaurs diet let them to migrate. because they live on plant food which in the ar...
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... edmontosaurs diet let them to migrate. because they live on plant food which in the ar...
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...ey should migrate to south to find food.In contrasty, the lecturer said in 100 mil...
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...uge food resorvoir for dinosaurs even as dead plant in the winter. Then, edmontas...
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...dmontasours didi not need to migrate. Second, the article states that finding...
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...rate. Second, the article states that finding of foddils of dinasour prov...
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... dinasour prove that they live in herd. it bring this as a reason that they could...
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... in herd and does not migrat at all. Third, athe article avers that this edmo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, however, if, second, so, then, third, in contrast, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 10.4613686534 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 5.04856512141 119% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 12.0772626932 99% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 22.412803532 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 30.3222958057 122% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1263.0 1373.03311258 92% => OK
No of words: 273.0 270.72406181 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62637362637 5.08290768461 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.04702891845 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31879415728 2.5805825403 90% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 145.348785872 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534798534799 0.540411800872 99% => OK
syllable_count: 381.6 419.366225166 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.23620309051 73% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 13.0662251656 92% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 21.2450331126 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.6954823367 49.2860985944 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.25 110.228320801 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.75 21.698381199 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.58333333333 7.06452816374 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 4.19205298013 310% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276132718602 0.272083759551 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0955369886642 0.0996497079465 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.065666348023 0.0662205650399 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162121729079 0.162205337803 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0438550155905 0.0443174109184 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.3589403974 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 53.8541721854 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.0289183223 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.87 12.2367328918 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.42419426049 92% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 63.6247240618 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.498013245 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.