TPO 29-Integrated writing
The passage discusses that million years age, when sinosaurs were alive, the envoironment of where they lived changed. So, because of bad condition on of these creatures migrated to another region. The passage provides three reasons for supporting this idea. However, the lecture states that this hypothesis is not correct and rejects all of author's reason.
First, the text says that Edmontosaurs fed on plants. During the cold climate eating plants was not practical because the weather was cold unsuiatable for growing plants. So, for having something to eat they migrated. However, the professor refutes this idea by stating that million years a go during the cold climate, the temperature was higher in comparison to today. So, the weather was warm enough for plants to grow. Also, if there were no plants or herbs to eat, these creatures could eat from dead remains of plants. The nutrition of dead plants was sufficient for creatures surviving.
Second, the text suggest that many skeletons belong to that creatures have found on the mentioned region that creatures migrated to there. However, the talk rejects thid idea too by stating that there is possibility that these skeletons are belonged to same creatures that lived there. So, the professor states that this documents is not convincing at all.
Third, the reading proposes that thise beast physically are capable to migrate, while the lecture rebuts this idea, again. The professor explains that the springs of these creatures were not physically caplale to migrate such long distanses. Additionally the springs of these beasts could not protect themeselves without their parents' help. So, this idea is not correct, too.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 120, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[4]
Message: “So , because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...voironment of where they lived changed. So, because of bad condition on of these creatures ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 64, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t Edmontosaurs fed on plants. During the cold climate eating plants was not pract...
^^
Line 4, column 243, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Additionally,
...caplale to migrate such long distanses. Additionally the springs of these beasts could not p...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, so, third, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.4613686534 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 7.30242825607 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 12.0772626932 124% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 22.412803532 120% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 30.3222958057 96% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1419.0 1373.03311258 103% => OK
No of words: 271.0 270.72406181 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23616236162 5.08290768461 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.04702891845 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50282992293 2.5805825403 97% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 145.348785872 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542435424354 0.540411800872 100% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 419.366225166 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 14.0 8.23620309051 170% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.25165562914 320% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 13.0662251656 138% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 21.2450331126 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.3539859279 49.2860985944 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.8333333333 110.228320801 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0555555556 21.698381199 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.05555555556 7.06452816374 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.27373068433 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197554784962 0.272083759551 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0632527210051 0.0996497079465 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0372972235002 0.0662205650399 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11422336056 0.162205337803 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0230842959659 0.0443174109184 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.3589403974 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 53.8541721854 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.0289183223 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.52 12.2367328918 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.42419426049 98% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 63.6247240618 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.7273730684 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.498013245 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
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