Sailors in Russia submarines has heard strange sounds, known as 'quackers'. The causes of this sounds are not clear yet, but the reading demonstrates some claims. The professor in the lecture, however, is obviously against the reading.
First, even though the reading explains these sounds could be as an effect of orca whales but the professor argues that it is not true. Because orca whales live near the surface of marine and sailors can see them easily but these sounds are from the deeper part of submarines, so it is not a compelling reason.
Moreover, contrary to the statement in the reading that giant squids could be the source of these sounds, the professor contends that these sounds are heard since two decades ago but as we know, squid live deep in the ocean since one decade ago. Hence, this claim is not enough strong.
Finally, the reading states that these sounds could be from some military technology like another country’s submarines. Nevertheless, the professor believes that these sound move around quickly but we know submarines can not move and change quickly. Although, by the new military technology, submarines are very fast and silent.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 89, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...ounds, known as quackers. The causes of this sounds are not clear yet, but the readi...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'finally', 'first', 'hence', 'however', 'moreover', 'nevertheless', 'so']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.225225225225 0.261695866417 86% => OK
Verbs: 0.121621621622 0.158904122519 77% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0810810810811 0.0723426182421 112% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0945945945946 0.0435111971325 217% => Less adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.0225225225225 0.0277247811725 81% => OK
Prepositions: 0.126126126126 0.128828473217 98% => OK
Participles: 0.0135135135135 0.0370669169778 36% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.51284826828 2.5805825403 97% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0045045045045 0.0208969081088 22% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00154638098197 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.135135135135 0.128158765124 105% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0225225225225 0.0158828679856 142% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0045045045045 0.0114777025283 39% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1173.0 1645.83664459 71% => OK
No of words: 194.0 271.125827815 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.04639175258 6.08160592843 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 4.04852973271 92% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.381443298969 0.374372842146 102% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.257731958763 0.287516216867 90% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.159793814433 0.187439937562 85% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.103092783505 0.113142543107 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51284826828 2.5805825403 97% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 145.348785872 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582474226804 0.539623497131 108% => OK
Word variations: 53.9358382628 53.8517498576 100% => OK
How many sentences: 10.0 13.0529801325 77% => OK
Sentence length: 19.4 21.7502111507 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.1441160576 49.3711431718 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.3 132.220823453 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4 21.7502111507 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.8 0.878197800319 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.39072847682 29% => OK
Readability: 45.1731958763 50.5018328374 89% => OK
Elegance: 1.52830188679 1.90840788429 80% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.596403475033 0.549887131256 108% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.12095961705 0.142949733639 85% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0979585564295 0.0787303798458 124% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.613946917812 0.631733273073 97% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.196847301623 0.139662658121 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.279647538556 0.266732575781 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.125068485942 0.103435571967 121% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.346556501195 0.414875509568 84% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0470550755416 0.0530846634433 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.430901175342 0.40443939384 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0382149678688 0.0528353158467 72% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 4.33554083885 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.26048565121 94% => OK
Positive topic words: 1.0 3.49668874172 29% => More positive topic words wanted.
Negative topic words: 5.0 3.62251655629 138% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 3.1766004415 126% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 10.2958057395 97% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Minimum 200 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.