TPO-34-1
The reading claims three theories about the extinction of a huge marine mammals known as Steller’s see cow. While the professor refuses these reason, since he believes these reasons are unconvincing.
Firstly, the reading opines that native people due to overhunting are the culprits of the extinction of Steller's sea cow. Controversy, the professor claims hat this mammals was very massive which the average weight of them was calculated about 10 tones. Therefore, these mammals could feed a village for a month and native people did not need to hunt they frequently.
Secondly, Although, the reading asserts that the sea cow population may have become extinct because of ecosystem changes, the professor elucidates that the population of other mammals such as whales can be decline in the ecosystem changes, While there have not been any reports related to decline of other mammals.
Eventually, the reading proves another theory associated with European migration who came to the island. Because they had weapons that allowed them to quickly kill a large number of animals. The professor rejects this theory, since he argues that before arriving of European the population of these mammals had been extinct and the European population are not blamed for this extinction.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 160, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
.... Controversy, the professor claims hat this mammals was very massive which the aver...
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Line 4, column 105, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...opean migration who came to the island. Because they had weapons that allowed them to q...
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Line 4, column 164, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...apons that allowed them to quickly kill a large number of animals. The professor rejects this the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.4613686534 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 7.30242825607 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 12.0772626932 58% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 22.412803532 80% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 30.3222958057 73% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.01324503311 160% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1083.0 1373.03311258 79% => OK
No of words: 203.0 270.72406181 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33497536946 5.08290768461 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 4.04702891845 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65914962094 2.5805825403 103% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 145.348785872 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576354679803 0.540411800872 107% => OK
syllable_count: 337.5 419.366225166 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.55342163355 109% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.25165562914 399% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 13.0662251656 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 21.2450331126 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.3809229046 49.2860985944 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.333333333 110.228320801 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5555555556 21.698381199 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.55555555556 7.06452816374 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 4.33554083885 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.27373068433 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.341343978289 0.272083759551 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128337760727 0.0996497079465 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0792335258326 0.0662205650399 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191116238938 0.162205337803 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0338752361962 0.0443174109184 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.3589403974 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 53.8541721854 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.0289183223 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.2367328918 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.42419426049 107% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 63.6247240618 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.7273730684 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.498013245 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.