In the reading the author mainly talks about difficulties that we may confront if we want to have a permanent station on Venus. The reading claims that conditions on the Venus are so extreme and inhospitable that maintaining a human presence there would be impossible. The professor, on the other hand, is somehow skeptical about the author's claim and raises several doubts on each each point made by the author.
In the first place, atmospheric pressure at Venus' surface is asserted to be great problem by the author. Atmospheric pressure at the Venus' surface is at least 90 times greater than the pressure at Earth's surface which is indeed coceded by the professor, but he believes that it would be problem if we want to build a station on the Venus' surface. He claims that if we build a satelite station at 50 kilometers above the Venus' surface we can avoid all the problems. The pressure in that height is about the same amount at the Earth's surface.
In addition, the article avers that there are no reservoirs of the water on Venus' surface, and the planets atmosphere, made up mostly of carbon dioxide, nitrogen, and sulfuric acid, contains hardly any oxygen or water vapor. Contrary to what is argued by the author, the professor contends that there are some chemical processes that can help to obtain essential resources such as water and oxygen directly from the Venus' atmosphere. According to the professor's proposal since the station is located above the atmosphere it would be easy having an access to the materials in the atmosphere.
In the end, the reading warns us from the very little sunlight that reaches the planet's surface. The professor refutes the last point by saying that this problem also easily can be approached by having a fixed station at previousely mentioned altitudes. Indeed, in this way not only we can use sunlight from direct solar radiations, but also we can exert reflected sunlights from the below clouds. So we are expected to be able to harvest more sunlight by solar cells and generate electricity even more than we may need.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... each each point made by the author. In the first place, atmospheric pressure...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, so, at least, in addition, such as, in the first place, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.4613686534 163% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 5.04856512141 218% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 12.0772626932 99% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 22.412803532 120% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 30.3222958057 165% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1723.0 1373.03311258 125% => OK
No of words: 355.0 270.72406181 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85352112676 5.08290768461 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.04702891845 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58078597692 2.5805825403 100% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 145.348785872 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504225352113 0.540411800872 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 544.5 419.366225166 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.51434878587 264% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 2.5761589404 272% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0662251656 107% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 21.2450331126 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.5106965972 49.2860985944 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.071428571 110.228320801 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3571428571 21.698381199 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.14285714286 7.06452816374 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 4.19205298013 215% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 4.45695364238 179% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.483853730467 0.272083759551 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.166575421401 0.0996497079465 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0919655965602 0.0662205650399 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.267314581963 0.162205337803 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0496072449748 0.0443174109184 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.3589403974 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 53.8541721854 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.0289183223 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.2367328918 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.42419426049 101% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 63.6247240618 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.498013245 114% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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