TPO 40: surface of the venus is not possible habitant for human
The reading claims that it would be impossible the presence of a human on Venus, for several rough conditions of this planet. However, the lecturer finds all of them dubious and asserts some evidence to refute all of them.
First, the reading explains that the pressure at Venus' surface is so high that is more than 90 times greater than the pressure at Earth. Therefore, when a spacecraft has been landed in Venus' surface because of the high pressure it will crush through one hour. On the contrary, the lecturer explains that this is not right and the force that pressing down on Venus's surface is equal of on the Earth. Thus, no crush will happen when the spacecraft is landing on the Venus' surface.
Second, the reading suggests that there are no reservoirs of water on Venus' surface. Moreover, its atmosphere consists of carbon dioxide, nitrogen, and sulfuric acid and it is impossible to supply water and oxygen from Earth. In contrast, the lecturer has completely rejected this idea and claims that it is possible to make water and oxygen and obtain it from the atmosphere.
Third, the reading takes the view that the little sunlight can reach the Venus' surface because of the clouds. The professor on the contrary claim that the cloud is not very thick and could reflect solar light.
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- TPO 21- Independent 3
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- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Educating childeren is more difficult task today than it was in the past because they spend so much time on cell phone, online games, and social networking web site. 70
- TPO45 -integrated writting 3
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, moreover, second, so, therefore, third, thus, in contrast, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.4613686534 105% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 5.04856512141 99% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 22.412803532 89% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 30.3222958057 89% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1073.0 1373.03311258 78% => OK
No of words: 224.0 270.72406181 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79017857143 5.08290768461 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 4.04702891845 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3466308825 2.5805825403 91% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 145.348785872 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526785714286 0.540411800872 97% => OK
syllable_count: 323.1 419.366225166 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0662251656 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 21.2450331126 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.0880456349 49.2860985944 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 97.5454545455 110.228320801 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3636363636 21.698381199 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.18181818182 7.06452816374 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 4.19205298013 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 4.33554083885 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 4.45695364238 157% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.453960196986 0.272083759551 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.155056964558 0.0996497079465 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0692400712969 0.0662205650399 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.231891379752 0.162205337803 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0484755612588 0.0443174109184 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.3589403974 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 53.8541721854 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.0289183223 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.2367328918 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.42419426049 94% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 63.6247240618 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.7273730684 84% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.498013245 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 68.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.5 Out of 30
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