agree or disagree to this statement: use internet instead of printed material
it goes without saying that in the modern world internet play a prominent role in people's lives. it is obvious that the best and comprehensive source is the internet. some people may an opinion that using printed book and papers are good. however, some others may take an opposite viewpoint and believe that the internet is a better choice. from my vantage point, the internet is significantly better than printed material. I will elaborate on my idea for three reasons.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that in such a sophisticated world, there are limited sources such as wood which is a raw material to produce papers. however, Printed book, newspaper, articles, etc., are used for a short period of time like a semester or to publish the news of a day or week, a lot of wood and ink should be consumed to publish them. The source which needs hundreds of years to renewable. based on the recent statistical studies that conducted in our country, every year, approximately two million trees are fallen down to produce papers which has more than one hundred years old. My own experience demonstrates that printed materials become usefulness after reading them. in two years ago I used printed sources and refuse to use internet-based one because it was so difficult for me to read sources in the laptop. Now I realized that it roughly impossible to refuge from E-books and internet-based sources.
Another standpoint reason coming mind is that using an update and comprehensive book is better than absolute edition one. the internet makes the opportunity to access update edition of book, articles and other materials which we need. there are numerous forums which are discussed and investigate books, news, theories, etc. Moreover, websites often suggest some related materials which are similar in topic or author or publisher. I strongly prefer internet-based books instead of a printed one.
The last but not least reason is that the price of the printed books against online ones. Today’s world there are numerous online stores which are sold an electronic version of books, magazines, articles, etc. on the other hand there are many online library and websites which are let free access to the public to use their materials. It is more economical (economically wrong) to use these websites instead of spending a lot of money to buy a printed material. Moreover, electronic materials have a lower price than the printed one. In my own experience, last week I strongly need a book to prepare my presentation and I had no time to go book-store and buy the book. I ordered it to an online bookstore and paid a low amount of money and surprisingly after two minutes, it sent to my email.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that it is better to use internet-based material instead of a printed one. I participated almost the internet-based material replaced in printed material.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, moreover, so, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.0286738351 172% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2415.0 1977.66487455 122% => OK
No of words: 487.0 407.700716846 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95893223819 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69766713281 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83718052439 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 238.0 212.727598566 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.488706365503 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 782.1 618.680645161 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0778293876 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.4444444444 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.037037037 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.14814814815 5.45110844103 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258268065374 0.236089414692 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0845732220653 0.076458572812 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0822455010566 0.0737576698707 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187399069925 0.150856017488 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0850766413166 0.0645574589148 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 86.8835125448 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.