tpo-41
the reading says about harmful maretials which is produced by burning coal and it makes government in united states concern and they believe thet it shoud be a new regilation to handel coal ash,but some comanies beleives it is not necessary to regulate in new way,but the lecturer says defenitely handeling coal ash is segnificant.
the reading states that companies use liners to prevent environment from contamination of harmful material,but lecturer says companies just use these lines for new one and it is not sufficient,and the old one is harmful contaminated,so lines have to be used for both new and old one.
the reading says strict ruls make coal ash recycle so difficult and it is so dangerous for the others who use these recycles,but lecturer says coal ash recycles contain materials like merkry which is faily hazardoas and stay in earth over 50 years ang it can be more harmful.
although as it is mentioned in reading one of the results of new regulation is increasing coast for the power c
- agree or disagree that government have to spend money to improve internet access than improve public transportation 60
- tpo22 task1 70
- agree or disagree one of the best way parents can help their teenage children to prepare fot their adult life is to encourage them to take a part time job 71
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
the reading says about harmful maretials wh...
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Line 1, column 194, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , but
...d be a new regilation to handel coal ash,but some comanies beleives it is not necess...
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Line 1, column 264, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , but
... is not necessary to regulate in new way,but the lecturer says defenitely handeling ...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
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Suggestion: The
...ely handeling coal ash is segnificant. the reading states that companies use liner...
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Line 2, column 107, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , but
...t from contamination of harmful material,but lecturer says companies just use these ...
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Line 2, column 193, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , and
...nes for new one and it is not sufficient,and the old one is harmful contaminated,so ...
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Line 2, column 233, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , so
...,and the old one is harmful contaminated,so lines have to be used for both new and ...
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Suggestion: The
...e to be used for both new and old one. the reading says strict ruls make coal ash ...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...e to be used for both new and old one. the reading says strict ruls make coal ash ...
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Suggestion: , but
...us for the others who use these recycles,but lecturer says coal ash recycles contain...
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Suggestion: Although
...r 50 years ang it can be more harmful. although as it is mentioned in reading one of th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.4613686534 115% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 5.04856512141 20% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 7.30242825607 151% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 12.0772626932 33% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 22.412803532 49% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 30.3222958057 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 838.0 1373.03311258 61% => OK
No of words: 172.0 270.72406181 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87209302326 5.08290768461 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 4.04702891845 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85241825237 2.5805825403 111% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 145.348785872 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581395348837 0.540411800872 108% => OK
syllable_count: 266.4 419.366225166 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 3.25607064018 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 8.23620309051 36% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.51434878587 330% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 13.0662251656 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 43.0 21.2450331126 202% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 83.0602191184 49.2860985944 169% => OK
Chars per sentence: 209.5 110.228320801 190% => OK
Words per sentence: 43.0 21.698381199 198% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.75 7.06452816374 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 4.19205298013 262% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.402000926711 0.272083759551 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.237169640067 0.0996497079465 238% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0541540368651 0.0662205650399 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.237169640067 0.162205337803 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0541540368651 0.0443174109184 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.0 13.3589403974 172% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.29 53.8541721854 67% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 5.55761589404 202% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 11.0289183223 171% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.85 12.2367328918 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.9 8.42419426049 118% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 63.6247240618 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 30.0 10.7273730684 280% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 19.2 10.498013245 183% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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