tpo 44
the reading states that silver coins which were discovered at native American site were originally related to European explorers who called Nors, but the lecturer says many people say these coins are not fake.
according to the reading, a long-distance between native American's site and eastern Canada which was the Norse settlement is good evidence to show that the coins are not related to the American site. but the lecturer says many other objects sign that they are not fake and Norse travel within North America, brought the coins back to their settlements.
secondly, the reading states that no other coins were found in the American site and many coins are found in Canada that is Nors settlement, but the lecturer says, Nors did not create a permanent settlement and they return to Europe.
according to the reading, Nors believe that these coins are not useful for them and although they were used in Europe, Americans did not use them as money, but according to the lecturer Americans like these unusual things and they were beautiful and were used in neckless and jewelries and also American
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: The
the reading states that silver coins which...
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Suggestion:
the reading states that silver coins which were discovered at na...
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Suggestion: According
... people say these coins are not fake. according to the reading, a long-distance between...
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Suggestion: But
...s are not related to the American site. but the lecturer says many other objects si...
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Suggestion: Secondly
... the coins back to their settlements. secondly, the reading states that no other coins...
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Suggestion: According
...settlement and they return to Europe. according to the reading, Nors believe that these...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, secondly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.4613686534 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 5.04856512141 0% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 7.30242825607 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 12.0772626932 75% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 22.412803532 71% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 30.3222958057 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 924.0 1373.03311258 67% => OK
No of words: 186.0 270.72406181 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96774193548 5.08290768461 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 4.04702891845 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34382088863 2.5805825403 91% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 145.348785872 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.483870967742 0.540411800872 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 297.0 419.366225166 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 3.25607064018 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 8.23620309051 36% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.51434878587 264% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 13.0662251656 38% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 21.2450331126 174% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.4392556578 49.2860985944 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 184.8 110.228320801 168% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.2 21.698381199 171% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06452816374 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 4.19205298013 143% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.27373068433 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.454307089331 0.272083759551 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.274810491782 0.0996497079465 276% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0685990191329 0.0662205650399 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.302272388756 0.162205337803 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0952198416835 0.0443174109184 215% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.6 13.3589403974 154% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.92 53.8541721854 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 5.55761589404 202% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 11.0289183223 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.14 12.2367328918 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.42419426049 95% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 63.6247240618 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.7273730684 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.498013245 160% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.5 Out of 30
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