TPO 43
In this set of materials the reading passages discusses that several evidence that shows a possibility shaps of how Agnostid animals lived in the past. While in the listening the professor casts doubts on what is presented in the text and believes that the evidence and also the reasons that explaine to support this described ideas is serously weakness.
First odf all, in the text it is clearly mentioned that the Agnostid were pradators and feeding from small merin animals that this animals were very plentiful at this time. However, the professor claims that this kind of praying need a large and well developted eyes, but we know that Agnostid was completely blond. On the other hand, we know that the Agnostid was not any other sensitive organs to can handel this kink of hunting.
In addition, the professor disagrees with this idea that the Agnostid settelled on the seafloor and feeding from bacterias. She says thatthis asomption is true about other types of arthropods that was not ability of fast moving. But, the Agnostid lived in different areas and moving very fast from one region to another.
Finally, in the text it is stated that this animals may be were parasites. the professor subscribes that the population of Agnostid were not very lorge. But should be the number of thousents paresates present in a host to can kill it. thus limited population of Agnostid shows that their populations were not big enough to support this concept.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 62, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[8]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun evidence seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'some evidence'.
Suggestion: some evidence
...als the reading passages discusses that several evidence that shows a possibility shaps of how A...
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Line 2, column 127, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...d feeding from small merin animals that this animals were very plentiful at this tim...
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Line 3, column 246, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...bility of fast moving. But, the Agnostid lived in different areas and moving very...
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Line 4, column 75, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...hat this animals may be were parasites. the professor subscribes that the populatio...
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Line 4, column 131, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...bscribes that the population of Agnostid were not very lorge. But should be the n...
^^
Line 4, column 271, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... it. thus limited population of Agnostid shows that their populations were not bi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, may, so, thus, well, while, in addition, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.4613686534 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 5.04856512141 99% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 7.30242825607 110% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 12.0772626932 116% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 22.412803532 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 30.3222958057 109% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.01324503311 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1214.0 1373.03311258 88% => OK
No of words: 247.0 270.72406181 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91497975709 5.08290768461 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.04702891845 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46727171659 2.5805825403 96% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 145.348785872 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53036437247 0.540411800872 98% => OK
syllable_count: 372.6 419.366225166 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 4.0 8.23620309051 49% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 2.5761589404 194% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 13.0662251656 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 21.2450331126 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.1298949499 49.2860985944 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.166666667 110.228320801 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5833333333 21.698381199 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.91666666667 7.06452816374 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 4.19205298013 143% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.354105094395 0.272083759551 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132861677557 0.0996497079465 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0574265599225 0.0662205650399 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208627884151 0.162205337803 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0453548533475 0.0443174109184 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.3589403974 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 53.8541721854 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.0289183223 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.2367328918 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.42419426049 98% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 63.6247240618 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.7273730684 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.498013245 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.