In the lecture, the professor deems that all of the three theories in the passage have serious weaknesses.
First and foremost, it is true that there are many free-swimming predators, but most of them have very large eyes and excellent vision ability to spot the preys. However, the agbistids only have tiny poorly developed eyes which are almost blind in water. So, if they were able to prey on other animals, there must be other sensory organs in their body that assist them. But it turns out that no such evidence was found from the fossil, meaning that agbistids were not necessarily free-swimming predators.
Moreover, seafloor dwellers usurally can't move fast and stay at the same location. Therefor, seafloor dwellers only occupy a small area where they orginate. However, agbistids could be found in mutiple sites and spread over a large ditance, meaning that thay could move fast and can spread a large distance, which is highly unusual for seafloor dewllers. So the seafloor dwellers theory can't hold water.
Last but not the least, parasites that stay within the hosts' body usually don't have large number, because too many parasites could kill off the hosts. Neverrtheless, evidence from the fossil presents that the agbistids are in a vast amout. There were so many individuals at one site that the possibility of agbistids being parasites is actually ruled out.
Based on the aforementioned analysis, the professor argues against all of the three theories.
- Educational institutions have a responsibility to dissuade students from pursing fields of study in which they are unlikely to succeed 58
- Educational institutions have a responsibility to dissuade students from pursing fields of study in which they are unlikely to succeed 83
- Internet 76
- Asteroids are large space objects made of rock and ice. There are hundreds of thousands of asteroids in our solar system. Though we often hear ideas about establishing colonies of humans to live and work on our Moon or our neighboring planet, Mars, som 3
- asteroids establishing colonies 3
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... Moreover, seafloor dwellers usurally cant move fast and stay at the same locatio...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...oor dwellers usurally cant move fast and stay at the same location. Therefor, sea...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...wllers. So the seafloor dwellers theory cant hold water. Last but not the least, ...
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Message: The adverb 'usually' is usually put before the verb 'body'.
Suggestion: usually body
...t, parasites that stay within the hosts body usually dont have large number, because too man...
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Suggestion: don't
...that stay within the hosts body usually dont have large number, because too many par...
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Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
... analysis, the professor argues against all of the three theories.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, however, if, moreover, so, well, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.4613686534 124% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 5.04856512141 99% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 7.30242825607 110% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 12.0772626932 99% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 22.412803532 71% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 30.3222958057 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1240.0 1373.03311258 90% => OK
No of words: 242.0 270.72406181 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12396694215 5.08290768461 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.04702891845 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55613836024 2.5805825403 99% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 145.348785872 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590909090909 0.540411800872 109% => OK
syllable_count: 380.7 419.366225166 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 3.0 8.23620309051 36% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0662251656 99% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 21.2450331126 85% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.628100879 49.2860985944 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.3846153846 110.228320801 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6153846154 21.698381199 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06452816374 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 4.19205298013 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 4.33554083885 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 4.45695364238 179% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205874241905 0.272083759551 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0711367692752 0.0996497079465 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0425179922169 0.0662205650399 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0935104172526 0.162205337803 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0684697004962 0.0443174109184 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.3589403974 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.8541721854 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.0289183223 93% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.2367328918 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.42419426049 100% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 63.6247240618 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.498013245 88% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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