The reading and the speaker discussing about silver coin as evidence for that Norse may be settled in North America more than 1000 years ago but both of them argue with different perspective point of view.
Firstly, reading passage says that Norse's settlement in North America is mislead-ed by some one purposely so we can't take this silver coin as evidence for settlement of Norse and more Atlantic ocean is great distance from the Europe to America it highly impossible for them to travel such long distance. But the lecturer argues this point by stating that they used to travel such long distance within the country so it is possible for them to cross long distance.
Secondly, reading passage claims that archaeologist didn't more coins in the North america so Norse may be not early settler in North america. But the professor refutes this by saying that Norse did not stay in North america permanently so they might have taken the silver coins along with them while returning to Europe.
Thirdly, reading passage suggests that North american never recognised as commodity, so North american may be had any trading with Norse. Even though speaker accept this point, he explains the reason for that in different way. He states that the North american attracted to silver so they might had made all silver coins into the jewels and other ornaments too. This evidence that they had trade with Norse.
To sum up, the reading passage says that distance, non availability of more coins suggests that the Norse was not early settler in north america but the speaker refutes these all points.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 88, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'someone'?
Suggestion: someone
...ement in North America is mislead-ed by some one purposely so we cant take this silver c...
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Line 3, column 113, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... mislead-ed by some one purposely so we cant take this silver coin as evidence for s...
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Line 5, column 53, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...ading passage claims that archaeologist didnt more coins in the North america so Nors...
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Line 9, column 188, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t the speaker refutes these all points.
^^^^^^^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'firstly', 'if', 'may', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'third', 'thirdly', 'while', 'to sum up']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.243902439024 0.261695866417 93% => OK
Verbs: 0.156794425087 0.158904122519 99% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0975609756098 0.0723426182421 135% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0627177700348 0.0435111971325 144% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0452961672474 0.0277247811725 163% => OK
Prepositions: 0.163763066202 0.128828473217 127% => OK
Participles: 0.0452961672474 0.0370669169778 122% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.2963082437 2.5805825403 89% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0243902439024 0.0208969081088 117% => OK
Particles: 0.00348432055749 0.00154638098197 225% => OK
Determiners: 0.0940766550523 0.128158765124 73% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0174216027875 0.0158828679856 110% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0 0.0114777025283 0% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1608.0 1645.83664459 98% => OK
No of words: 270.0 271.125827815 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.95555555556 6.08160592843 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.04852973271 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.32962962963 0.374372842146 88% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.248148148148 0.287516216867 86% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.144444444444 0.187439937562 77% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0814814814815 0.113142543107 72% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2963082437 2.5805825403 89% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 145.348785872 90% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.485185185185 0.539623497131 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 46.0794635967 53.8517498576 86% => OK
How many sentences: 10.0 13.0529801325 77% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 21.7502111507 124% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.4274792537 49.3711431718 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 160.8 132.220823453 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 21.7502111507 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.2 0.878197800319 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 3.39072847682 118% => OK
Readability: 51.8148148148 50.5018328374 103% => OK
Elegance: 1.71052631579 1.90840788429 90% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.586401646637 0.549887131256 107% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.149482979187 0.142949733639 105% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.115912629511 0.0787303798458 147% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.72176787864 0.631733273073 114% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.198167734885 0.139662658121 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.299059548744 0.266732575781 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103024258993 0.103435571967 100% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.298495961376 0.414875509568 72% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0448042921446 0.0530846634433 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.406797315183 0.40443939384 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0468331233475 0.0528353158467 89% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.26048565121 117% => OK
Positive topic words: 3.0 3.49668874172 86% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 3.62251655629 55% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 3.1766004415 157% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 10.2958057395 97% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.