In the article, the author suggests that the coin found in the native American archaeological site might be a historical fake, and proposed three reasons, which is refuted by the professor in the lecture.
Firstly, the author suggests that the distance between the native American site in Maine is too far from other sites in the north American. However, the professor indicates that other sites in the North American are also far from each other. Additionally, the Norse are capable of traveling a long distance and brings something interesting back such as the silver coin, therefore this coin could be related to the Norse.
Secondly, the author mentions that no other coins were found in the Canadian sites, indicating that the coin could have no relationship with Norse. In Contrast, the professor indicates that since the Norse hardly build the permanent settlements and the Norse like to pack up every valuable things, they would also pack the silver coins. Therefore there is no wonder that no other coins were found in other sites.
Finally, the author points out that the Norse are experienced travelers who would know that the native North Americans would not recognize the silver as money, and thus Norse would not take it. Nevertheless, the professor refutes that the North know that native North Americans would attach importance to the silver coins for it's attractive appearance, and the locals could make the silver coin into the necklace or some jewelry because their beautiful shape and color. Therefore the Norse would use silver coin to trade with the native North Americans, answering why the Norse would carry silver coins.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 338, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
... they would also pack the silver coins. Therefore there is no wonder that no other coins ...
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Line 7, column 471, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...ecause their beautiful shape and color. Therefore the Norse would use silver coin to trad...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, however, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, in contrast, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.4613686534 96% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 5.04856512141 218% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 12.0772626932 108% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 22.412803532 71% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 30.3222958057 82% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1384.0 1373.03311258 101% => OK
No of words: 271.0 270.72406181 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10701107011 5.08290768461 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.04702891845 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46146206465 2.5805825403 95% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 145.348785872 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.490774907749 0.540411800872 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 431.1 419.366225166 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.51434878587 198% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 13.0662251656 77% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 21.2450331126 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.1240242406 49.2860985944 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.4 110.228320801 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1 21.698381199 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7 7.06452816374 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.545711208669 0.272083759551 201% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.234244064691 0.0996497079465 235% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0562564161248 0.0662205650399 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.327867516652 0.162205337803 202% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0700476986924 0.0443174109184 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.3589403974 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 53.8541721854 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.0289183223 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.2367328918 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.42419426049 94% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 63.6247240618 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 10.7273730684 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.498013245 122% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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