TPO 48 Integrated
There is a debate about factors of frog population decreased. The reading material lists three major reasons, however, professor in the lecture refutes those by providing strong evidence.
first of all, reading passage points out that frogs population is harmed by pesticide which will do damage to frogs' nerve system. In this way, government should propose a law to restrict pesticide using. In the contrast, the speaker in the listening believes that it is not fair or economical for these farmers. it will have severe damaged to corps by those pest and yield less. Thus, the farmers will lose more corps and not be competitive to farmers in other area. Therefore, first point in reading does not hold the water.
In addition, the reading material illustrates that a deadly fungus will cause thickening skin of frog and finally frogs die for the dehydration. however, the lecturer in the listening finds this point is indefensible. She intends that treatment is provided in the passage has to be applied on individual frogs, and it is hard to apply this treatment on a large scale. it also cannot stop fungus to affect their offspring, which means people have to do the same treatment over and over. it is too expensive to execute such treatments.
At last but not the least, despite the statement in the reading that human activities threats frog’s natural habitats, which causes frogs have less and less habitats to lay their eggs in the water. In the controversy, the listening material disserts that global warming is the real reason cause habitats vanishing. it will not help to protect the habitats of frog to reduce the human activities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... those by providing strong evidence. first of all, reading passage points out...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: First
...e by providing strong evidence. first of all, reading passage points out that...
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Line 5, column 111, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'frog'.
Suggestion: frog
...ed by pesticide which will do damage to frogs nerve system. In this way, government s...
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Line 5, column 313, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...t fair or economical for these farmers. it will have severe damaged to corps by th...
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Line 5, column 353, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this pest' or 'those pests'?
Suggestion: this pest; those pests
...it will have severe damaged to corps by those pest and yield less. Thus, the farmers will ...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... in reading does not hold the water. In addition, the reading material illust...
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Line 9, column 146, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
... finally frogs die for the dehydration. however, the lecturer in the listening finds th...
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Line 9, column 369, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
... apply this treatment on a large scale. it also cannot stop fungus to affect their...
^^
Line 9, column 487, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...to do the same treatment over and over. it is too expensive to execute such treatm...
^^
Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...xpensive to execute such treatments. At last but not the least, despite the s...
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Line 13, column 158, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun habitats is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...itats, which causes frogs have less and less habitats to lay their eggs in the water...
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Line 13, column 321, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...e real reason cause habitats vanishing. it will not help to protect the habitats o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, so, therefore, thus, as to, in addition, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.4613686534 96% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 5.04856512141 139% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 7.30242825607 110% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 12.0772626932 75% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 22.412803532 94% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 30.3222958057 129% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.01324503311 199% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1396.0 1373.03311258 102% => OK
No of words: 277.0 270.72406181 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03971119134 5.08290768461 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.04702891845 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60822767307 2.5805825403 101% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 145.348785872 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5559566787 0.540411800872 103% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 419.366225166 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.23620309051 73% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 2.5761589404 233% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 13.0662251656 122% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 21.2450331126 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.3615980079 49.2860985944 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.25 110.228320801 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3125 21.698381199 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5625 7.06452816374 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 4.19205298013 286% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 4.45695364238 202% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.355759887497 0.272083759551 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106338140351 0.0996497079465 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104832720421 0.0662205650399 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207508450332 0.162205337803 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0681425859139 0.0443174109184 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.3589403974 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 53.8541721854 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.0289183223 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.2367328918 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.42419426049 99% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 63.6247240618 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.7273730684 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.498013245 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.