TPO 49
The reading and listening are both about humpcack whales navigation ability by stars.
The author of reading declares that humpback may be navigated by stars.The lecturer casts doubt on claims made in article. He thinks evidence for this is not convincing, Although it is fascinate.
first,The author of reading claims that this type of whales have high intelligent in order to use stars for navigation.The professor counters that argument by asserting that the intelligent of humpback whales is not high and he clarify this issue with an example. He describes ducks which use stars to navigate but ducks not only do not have high intelligent but also their intelligent is average. That why, professor believes that there is no connection between using stars to navigate and high intelligent.
second,While the reading states that humpback whales migerat in straight lines.The author thinks that some animals like humpback whales use stars to continue their path.
The lecturer insists on humpback whales have bio magnetic sensor in their brain to sense external object or force and they sense magnetic field rather than stars.
third,In contrast to the reading,which claims that spy-hopping helps humpback whales get information of stars to navigate their track,The lecturer states that spy-hopping is rare among animals,but this is irrelevant to star navigation.For instance,sharks use spy-hopping to hunt.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 71, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...that humpback may be navigated by stars.The lecturer casts doubt on claims made in ...
^^^
Line 2, column 71, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...that humpback may be navigated by stars.The lecturer casts doubt on claims made in ...
^^^
Line 2, column 185, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'fascinated'.
Suggestion: fascinated
... this is not convincing, Although it is fascinate. first,The author of reading claims th...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: First
... convincing, Although it is fascinate. first,The author of reading claims that this ...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 6, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , The
...incing, Although it is fascinate. first,The author of reading claims that this type...
^^^^
Line 3, column 119, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...nt in order to use stars for navigation.The professor counters that argument by ass...
^^^
Line 3, column 228, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'clarifies'.
Suggestion: clarifies
...t of humpback whales is not high and he clarify this issue with an example. He describe...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 462, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eves that there is no connection between using stars to navigate and high intelli...
^^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Second
...tars to navigate and high intelligent. second,While the reading states that humpback ...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 7, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , While
...o navigate and high intelligent. second,While the reading states that humpback whales...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 79, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...mpback whales migerat in straight lines.The author thinks that some animals like h...
^^^
Line 4, column 119, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...The author thinks that some animals like humpback whales use stars to continue th...
^^
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Third
...ense magnetic field rather than stars. third,In contrast to the reading,which claims...
^^^^^
Line 6, column 6, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , In
...magnetic field rather than stars. third,In contrast to the reading,which claims th...
^^^
Line 6, column 33, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , which
...stars. third,In contrast to the reading,which claims that spy-hopping helps humpback ...
^^^^^^
Line 6, column 134, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , The
...rmation of stars to navigate their track,The lecturer states that spy-hopping is rar...
^^^^
Line 6, column 193, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , but
...s that spy-hopping is rare among animals,but this is irrelevant to star navigation.F...
^^^^
Line 6, column 235, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
...t this is irrelevant to star navigation.For instance,sharks use spy-hopping to hunt...
^^^
Line 6, column 247, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , sharks
...relevant to star navigation.For instance,sharks use spy-hopping to hunt.
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, so, third, while, for instance, in contrast, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.4613686534 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 5.04856512141 20% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 7.30242825607 110% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 12.0772626932 99% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 22.412803532 103% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 30.3222958057 96% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.01324503311 160% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1196.0 1373.03311258 87% => OK
No of words: 218.0 270.72406181 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48623853211 5.08290768461 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 4.04702891845 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88441300743 2.5805825403 112% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 145.348785872 81% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54128440367 0.540411800872 100% => OK
syllable_count: 356.4 419.366225166 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.116997792494 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 13.0662251656 69% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 21.2450331126 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.8085553107 49.2860985944 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.888888889 110.228320801 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2222222222 21.698381199 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4444444444 7.06452816374 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.09492273731 147% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 19.0 4.19205298013 453% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.272083759551 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.0996497079465 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0662205650399 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.162205337803 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0443174109184 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.3589403974 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 53.8541721854 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.0289183223 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.86 12.2367328918 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.42419426049 99% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 63.6247240618 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.498013245 110% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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