tpo46
Second,The reading and listening are both about advantages and disadvantages of electronic medical document. The author of reading declares that electronic databases has many benefits. The lecturer casts doubt on the claims made in the article.She thinks that the reasons of reading is uncertainty.
First,Although the author of reading claims that costs is diminished by electronic documents. On the other hand the information of patients save in computer,as result the problem of storage space is solved and doctors can use of these information without any faxing and transporting paper records. The professor counters that argument by asserting that for some action such as signature doctors need paper consequently the expense not only will not decrease but also in some cases increase.
Third,While the reading mentions that electronic medical records reduce the error drastically.The lecturer insists that electronic medical system can not eliminate these error because the doctors who adapt electronic medical system still use pen and take note consequently the error may happen.
In contrast to the reading,which claims that electronic medical document enhance research and help to researchers are improved their research by using digital data base,The lecturer states that access to information for researcher is difficult.Using patient medical information due to privacy laws need long permission
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 7, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , The
Second,The reading and listening are both about ad...
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Line 1, column 245, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: She
...doubt on the claims made in the article.She thinks that the reasons of reading is u...
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Line 2, column 6, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Although
...easons of reading is uncertainty. First,Although the author of reading claims that costs...
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Line 2, column 156, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , as
...information of patients save in computer,as result the problem of storage space is ...
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Line 2, column 229, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this information' or 'these informations'?
Suggestion: this information; these informations
... space is solved and doctors can use of these information without any faxing and transporting pap...
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Line 3, column 6, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , While
... but also in some cases increase. Third,While the reading mentions that electronic me...
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Line 3, column 94, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...al records reduce the error drastically.The lecturer insists that electronic medica...
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Line 3, column 164, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this error' or 'these errors'?
Suggestion: this error; these errors
...tronic medical system can not eliminate these error because the doctors who adapt electroni...
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Line 4, column 27, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , which
... may happen. In contrast to the reading,which claims that electronic medical document...
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Line 4, column 169, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , The
...heir research by using digital data base,The lecturer states that access to informat...
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Line 4, column 244, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Using
...information for researcher is difficult.Using patient medical information due to priv...
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Line 4, column 318, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...due to privacy laws need long permission
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, may, second, so, still, third, while, in contrast, such as, in contrast to, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.4613686534 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 5.04856512141 119% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 22.412803532 58% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 30.3222958057 73% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.01324503311 160% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1204.0 1373.03311258 88% => OK
No of words: 208.0 270.72406181 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.78846153846 5.08290768461 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 4.04702891845 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04217154222 2.5805825403 118% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 145.348785872 84% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586538461538 0.540411800872 109% => OK
syllable_count: 376.2 419.366225166 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.55342163355 116% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.116997792494 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.23620309051 73% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.25165562914 240% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 13.0662251656 61% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 21.2450331126 122% => OK
Sentence length SD: 87.1335182349 49.2860985944 177% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.5 110.228320801 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 21.698381199 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 18.0 7.06452816374 255% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 4.19205298013 286% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.414262565164 0.272083759551 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145639551643 0.0996497079465 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101815186502 0.0662205650399 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224785539371 0.162205337803 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0846460173371 0.0443174109184 191% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.8 13.3589403974 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.17 53.8541721854 52% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 5.55761589404 202% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.0289183223 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.6 12.2367328918 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.09 8.42419426049 120% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 63.6247240618 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.7273730684 84% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.498013245 118% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 11.2008830022 170% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.