in this set of materials, the reading passage discusses the humpback whales navigated on the sea using stars. while in the listening, the professor casts doubt on what is presented in the text and believes that this theory is fascinating but it is not convincing.
First of all, in the text it is clearly mentionec that the humback whales are intelligent enough to have ability of navigate through stars. However, the professor claims that using stars for navigation is not related to intelligent because for example, some animals like dogs or some birds using stars for navigation. But, for intence dogs have average intelligent not high thus this conction between intelligent and useing stars for avigation is not acceptable.
In addition, the professor disagrees with this idea that the humpback whales need the external force to migrate in the straight lines and this force is stars. He points out that this force is magnetic in the Whales brain and animals magnetic is sensitive to the magnetic field of Earth not related to stars.
Finally, in the text, it is stated that the behavior of spy-hopping is a cluster of maybe humpback whales looking upward to see stars. The professor subscribes that another animals like sharks do spy-hopping but they do not look to stars because they do this behavior during the day and it is for finding prey, not for navigation.
- For the successful development of a country, it is more important for a government to spend money on the education of very young children (five to ten years old) than to spend money on universities. 83
- TPO 35- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Famous entertainers and athletes deserve to have more privacy than they have now.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 70
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more important for governments to spend money to improve Internet access than to improve public transportation. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 70
- TPO 35- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Famous entertainers and athletes deserve to have more privacy than they have now.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 78
- Most advertisements make products seem much better than they really are. 90
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
in this set of materials, the reading pass...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: While
...hales navigated on the sea using stars. while in the listening, the professor casts d...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, look, may, so, thus, while, for example, in addition, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.4613686534 124% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 5.04856512141 20% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 7.30242825607 110% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 12.0772626932 58% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 22.412803532 94% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 30.3222958057 99% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1141.0 1373.03311258 83% => OK
No of words: 231.0 270.72406181 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93939393939 5.08290768461 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 4.04702891845 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60225376699 2.5805825403 101% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 145.348785872 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.480519480519 0.540411800872 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 348.3 419.366225166 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 5.0 8.23620309051 61% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 13.0662251656 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 21.2450331126 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.3798478171 49.2860985944 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 126.777777778 110.228320801 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6666666667 21.698381199 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6666666667 7.06452816374 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.383556704961 0.272083759551 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.156301696568 0.0996497079465 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0601159762292 0.0662205650399 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213900083845 0.162205337803 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0545409338882 0.0443174109184 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.3589403974 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 53.8541721854 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.0289183223 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.2367328918 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.42419426049 97% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 63.6247240618 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.7273730684 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.498013245 114% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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