TPO 5-INTEGRATED WRITING ESSAY
he passage and the talk both discuss the fact about how the dwelling of one of the cities in New Mexico in United State used the massive stone building. Which contains hundreds of room and three to four stories high.The writer contends three theories related to great houses which it used for residential , using for store foods, and used for ceremonies as well. However, the narrator refutes the auther's assessment and he demonstrate three reasons to cast doubted of the claims made in the passage.
The first allegation of the script against which the orator argues is the great houses used solely for residential because the first theory suggest that for each house hundreds of people can live in it. Foe instance, it considered like apartment building which plethora of people lived their for decades. But the lecturer poses that the great houses look hug from outside only. In contrast to inside which seems it doesn't compensate hundreds of people because there are no enough fireplaces to cook. For example, more than one hundred rooms couldn't consider residential .
Second, according to the text, that these buildings used for storing the foods supplies as well. Moreover, foods can last long without impact the food's quality. Though, the speaker find this idea is debatable. He bolsters his opinion by stating that the excavation uncovered the green maize or container. In contrast to the fact that their is a lot of spoil green maize on the floor addition to remain a lot of containers. Finally, the reading passage believe that the great houses used for ceremonies. For gathering people they can find broken pots. But the aerator said that a lot of materials beside broken pots which found. Like for example, stone, sand, and construction materials as well. He agree that all these material should through it away or trash it. So that's what he suggest that the reading was not provided enough evidence.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: He
he passage and the talk both discuss the f...
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Line 1, column 4, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'passages'.
Suggestion: passages
he passage and the talk both discuss the fact abou...
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Line 1, column 217, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
... of room and three to four stories high.The writer contends three theories related ...
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Line 1, column 305, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...eat houses which it used for residential , using for store foods, and used for cer...
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Line 1, column 424, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'demonstrates'.
Suggestion: demonstrates
...r refutes the authers assessment and he demonstrate three reasons to cast doubted of the cl...
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Line 2, column 415, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...y. In contrast to inside which seems it doesnt compensate hundreds of people because t...
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Line 2, column 541, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...or example, more than one hundred rooms couldnt consider residential . Second, accordi...
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Line 2, column 569, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ndred rooms couldnt consider residential . Second, according to the text, that th...
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Line 3, column 161, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Though” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... long without impact the foods quality. Though, the speaker find this idea is debatabl...
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Line 3, column 334, Rule ID: THEIR_IS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
...container. In contrast to the fact that their is a lot of spoil green maize on the fl...
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Line 3, column 698, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'He' must be used with a third-person verb: 'agrees'.
Suggestion: agrees
... and construction materials as well. He agree that all these material should through ...
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Line 3, column 767, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
... should through it away or trash it. So thats what he suggest that the reading was no...
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Line 3, column 781, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'suggests'.
Suggestion: suggests
...h it away or trash it. So thats what he suggest that the reading was not provided enoug...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, look, moreover, second, so, well, for example, in contrast, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.4613686534 48% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 12.0772626932 124% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 22.412803532 120% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 30.3222958057 122% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.01324503311 160% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1593.0 1373.03311258 116% => OK
No of words: 321.0 270.72406181 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96261682243 5.08290768461 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.04702891845 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39575677576 2.5805825403 93% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 145.348785872 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576323987539 0.540411800872 107% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 419.366225166 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Article: 5.0 8.23620309051 61% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.51434878587 264% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 13.0662251656 145% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 21.2450331126 75% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.5344988082 49.2860985944 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.8421052632 110.228320801 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8947368421 21.698381199 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.47368421053 7.06452816374 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.09492273731 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 4.19205298013 310% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 4.33554083885 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.27373068433 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.272083759551 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.0996497079465 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0662205650399 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.162205337803 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0443174109184 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.3589403974 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 53.8541721854 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.0289183223 76% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 12.2367328918 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.42419426049 94% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 63.6247240618 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.7273730684 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.498013245 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 20 minutes.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted. The correct pattern:
para 1: introduction
para 2: doubt 1
para 3: doubt 2
para 4: doubt 3
Less contents wanted from the reading passages(25%), more content wanted from the lecture (75%).
Don't need a conclusion paragraph.
Read sample essays from ETS:
http://www.testbig.com/users/toeflwritingmaster
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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