TPO14 - INTEGRATED ESSAY
The reading and the lecture are both about salvage logging, which is removing deads trees from areas that affected by fire or severe storms and using them for industrial products. The author of the reading believs that it has many merits both to forest and the economy. The lecture casts doubt on the claims made in the article. She thinks this practice has more disadvantages than advantages.
First of all, the authors claims that salvage logging is useful for grown new trees and plants. He believes enough free space in the forest causes growing new trees. This point is challenged by the lecture. She says that removing dead trees is not useful for growing new plants. On the other hand, if we omit these trees we make the soil less nutrient and it is not good for new trees because soil of forest uses the dead tree to have more mineral materials.
Secondly, the authors states that dead trees is suitable place for harmful insects and if we do not allow salvage logging, we have real danger about the health of forest. This argument is rebutted by the lecture. She suggests, other birds and insects uses these decaying wood too, and they are useful for forsets. So these woods are not only the habitat for harmful insects. Furthermore, these insects usually exists in the forest and their existence are not because the being dead trees.
Finally, the author mentions that salvage logging has economic benefits such as more woods for industries that be affected by these disasters. He adds salvage logging can create additional jobs. The lecture, on the other hand, feels that it is not beneficial for industries because they need helicopter and other special vehicles that make this practice very expensive and it is not practical. Also, the idea of making new job is not true because this type of work is temporary and workers are out of local people.
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Essay evaluation report
from areas that affected by fire or severe storms
from areas that are affected by fire or severe storms
from areas affected by fire or severe storms
is useful for grown new trees and plants.
is useful for growing new trees and plants.
dead trees is suitable place
dead trees are suitable places
other birds and insects uses these decaying wood too
other birds and insects use these decaying woods too
these insects usually exists in the forest
these insects usually exist in the forest
for industries that be affected by these disasters
for industries that can be affected by these disasters
for industries affected by these disasters
Sentence: The author of the reading believs that it has many merits both to forest and the economy.
Error: believs Suggestion: believe
Sentence: She suggests, other birds and insects uses these decaying wood too, and they are useful for forsets.
Error: forsets Suggestion: forests
Sentence: So these woods are not only the habitat for harmful insects.
Error: woods Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: Finally, the author mentions that salvage logging has economic benefits such as more woods for industries that be affected by these disasters.
Error: woods Suggestion: No alternate word
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 6 2
No. of Words: 322 250
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 20 in 30
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 6 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 2 2
No. of Sentences: 18 12
No. of Words: 322 250
No. of Characters: 1505 1200
No. of Different Words: 157 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.236 4.2
Average Word Length: 4.674 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.16 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 103 80
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 76 60
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 35 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 16 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 17.889 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.049 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.444 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.314 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.503 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.144 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 271, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... merits both to forest and the economy. The lecture casts doubt on the claims made ...
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Line 7, column 80, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ge logging has economic benefits such as more woods for industries that be affect...
^^
Line 7, column 370, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s that make this practice very expensive and it is not practical. Also, the idea ...
^^
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'finally', 'first', 'furthermore', 'if', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'such as', 'first of all', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.241477272727 0.261695866417 92% => OK
Verbs: 0.164772727273 0.158904122519 104% => OK
Adjectives: 0.122159090909 0.0723426182421 169% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0482954545455 0.0435111971325 111% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0482954545455 0.0277247811725 174% => OK
Prepositions: 0.125 0.128828473217 97% => OK
Participles: 0.0397727272727 0.0370669169778 107% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.26060719589 2.5805825403 88% => OK
Infinitives: 0.00568181818182 0.0208969081088 27% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00154638098197 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.102272727273 0.128158765124 80% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00284090909091 0.0158828679856 18% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0142045454545 0.0114777025283 124% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1867.0 1645.83664459 113% => OK
No of words: 322.0 271.125827815 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.79813664596 6.08160592843 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.04852973271 105% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.326086956522 0.374372842146 87% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.248447204969 0.287516216867 86% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.139751552795 0.187439937562 75% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0590062111801 0.113142543107 52% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26060719589 2.5805825403 88% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 145.348785872 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.496894409938 0.539623497131 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 50.5110093779 53.8517498576 94% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 13.0529801325 138% => OK
Sentence length: 17.8888888889 21.7502111507 82% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.3309111509 49.3711431718 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.722222222 132.220823453 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8888888889 21.7502111507 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.666666666667 0.878197800319 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 3.39072847682 88% => OK
Readability: 42.7336093858 50.5018328374 85% => OK
Elegance: 1.55434782609 1.90840788429 81% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.710702464972 0.549887131256 129% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.10827145832 0.142949733639 76% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0986665976558 0.0787303798458 125% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.510604529531 0.631733273073 81% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.162813895421 0.139662658121 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.27598294332 0.266732575781 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114022030819 0.103435571967 110% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.422179005032 0.414875509568 102% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0369639196988 0.0530846634433 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.528024438792 0.40443939384 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0388158775754 0.0528353158467 73% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 4.45695364238 247% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.26048565121 23% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 6.0 3.49668874172 172% => OK
Negative topic words: 9.0 3.62251655629 248% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 3.1766004415 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 15.0 10.2958057395 146% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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