TPO:24
The reading and the lecture are all about the declining period of the dinosaur which leads us by arguing on several methods. The author of the reading believes the finding of a 70-million-year-old fossil of T.rex.In contrast to that, the speaker casts doubt on claims made in the article. He thinks that the results might be vulnerable and seems too vague.
Initially, the penman of the reading points out that inside a bone there still a soft, flexible organic substance is seen. It is also mentioned that, the presence of blood vessels on the basis of that substance of T. rex. The orator challenges this point. He says that since it had been staying for a long time there is a strong possibility that the substance might be the reason of a bacterial species. Furthermore, he says that most of the cases bacteria took place in the hollow area of a bone of a dead animal.
After that, the lecturer contends that microscopic evidence of inner bone is another thing which posits its existence. Moreover, he says that the reddish sphere on the wall of the bone shows to us the size of its blood cell. Owing to the fact, the lecturer establishes a point that mineral could be the reason of that particular red sphere block.
Finally, the author takes the collagen as a point to establish his point. But the speaker tells us that human skin also bears such kind of collagen. It could be the skin collagen of the researcher. So there is no such way to prove that this are the reason of its esistence.
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- Hosting sporting events such as the Olympics and the world cup can bring benefits to the host countries. How far do you agree with this statements? Use your examples to support. 66
- TPO:24 75
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? “Overall, the widespread use of the internet has a mostly positive effect on life in today's world." 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 214, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, furthermore, moreover, so, still, another thing, in contrast, kind of, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.4613686534 115% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 7.30242825607 41% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 17.0 12.0772626932 141% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 22.412803532 138% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 30.3222958057 122% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1232.0 1373.03311258 90% => OK
No of words: 269.0 270.72406181 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57992565056 5.08290768461 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.04702891845 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55247710482 2.5805825403 99% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 145.348785872 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531598513011 0.540411800872 98% => OK
syllable_count: 373.5 419.366225166 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 3.25607064018 184% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 21.2450331126 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.0622303911 49.2860985944 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.1333333333 110.228320801 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9333333333 21.698381199 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06452816374 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.27373068433 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269179918455 0.272083759551 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.080760475179 0.0996497079465 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0515889771955 0.0662205650399 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148711401192 0.162205337803 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0505517472821 0.0443174109184 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.3589403974 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 53.8541721854 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.0289183223 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 12.2367328918 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.42419426049 92% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 63.6247240618 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.498013245 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.