Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:
"It is better to use print materials such as books and articles to do research than it is to use the internet use specific reasons and examples to support your answer"
Everyone has their own preferred study methods, and all of them have their own strengths and weakness. In my opinion, it is better to conduct a research with the help of the Internet rather than the help of printed books and other accessories. I feel this way for two main reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, the Internet makes an extensive research quite cheap economically rather than expensive way. Minimum lengths of a research last 6-8 months, which means it requires lots of materials which will be gone through by the researcher within this time frame. To run the studies the experimenter needs a lot of investment if it is printed. Sometimes due to lack of money some research gets an end in the middle of the experiment. My own experience is a good example of this. When I was attempting to do a research in my undergrad, the thing first was advised by my teacher to make a chart by addressing Pros and Cons of my research on the basis of my research will be successful or not. That time I realized that 'Internet ' the wonder of modern science take greater responsibility to manage my research smoothly. If Inter was not there for me at that time maybe it could be very difficult to do my research because of its price. I progressed much more quickly.
Furthermore, lacking of available resources is a very good problem to do a fruitful research. There are lots of resources available in the world. But most of the time it seems difficult to get those resources. The Internet has become a solutionist of that type of problem. Having an example of what I am going to share now happened to me. As I have said above internet minimize our cost to do research in an extensive way.besides before getting that resources Inter made it available to review it. For my research purpose, I had to go through lots of articles, sub-articles,video-explanations and so on. after reviewing all of these I decided it will be appropriate or not for my research. Sometimes I did not know what types of paper or article would be useful to me. But typing the particular key I used to get lots of information available in front of me like magic. which was very helpful to me.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that managing research with the help of the Internet is better than using a hard-copied book. This is because it is cheap or very cost-friendly and because it is very available.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, furthermore, if, may, so, i feel, in conclusion, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 67.0 52.1666666667 128% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1987.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 429.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6317016317 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55107846309 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03784966698 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.503496503497 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 630.0 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.5869236927 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.7916666667 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.875 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.08333333333 5.45110844103 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202059921766 0.236089414692 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0553683750429 0.076458572812 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.058262479346 0.0737576698707 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119713425783 0.150856017488 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0281553513232 0.0645574589148 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 11.7677419355 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.