Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Understanding the path we ought to choose, in our life is the greatest problem of all. Extensively considered the traits include honesty, being thoughtful, loyalty to name but a few. Honesty, the one among them is the highly considerable fact which plays a vital role to constitute and reflect our personality. In order to choose, some people advocate not to being truthful alway while others want to strict with honesty. But I, for one, subscribed to the former group for a quite few reasons, these conspicuous ones of which have been elaborated upon under.
The First Justification for not being truthful always is to avoid unwanted obstacles in my way of the career. The world we are living in now is the mid-stage of globalization. Everybody is running to fulfill their motto. Achieving one's own dream everybody has to have a well-furnished career which will help him to flourish him in the long run. In that period of struggling, he has to face my obstacles, only can avoidable with the help of a cunning attitude which will not always be a part of honesty. But if he strict with honesty, his career is likely to be affected. Here I am going to share an experience from my own. As a tech personality, I started my career in a software company as a software developer. In my agreement with that company, it was pretty clear that my duration of work will not be more than 8 hours but the matter of fact was, most of the time, I had to continue more than 10 hours. getting sacked from that company as a consequence of raising my voice against the terms and condition agreed with me. So just because of being truthful, I had to lose my job at that time.
On top of that, sometimes being truthful could be a reason to hurt somebody. For instance, one day one of my friends came to show his new dress just brought and was very excited to know my opinion. Although, the things he brought to my looking like disgusting but till I had to say that it was good just not to dishearten him because there was a sticker on that where it was written that "the sold goods are non-refundable". Of course, if it was refundable then I might tell him the truth.
To wrap it up, It is better to be honest unless it hurts you or your surroundings because making smile on someone's face is really a tough job than crying him and because for a bigger chase sometimes something is to lose.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, really, so, then, well, while, as to, for instance, of course, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 15.1003584229 192% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1953.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 434.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56428161445 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74246693529 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546082949309 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 612.9 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.6744562923 48.9658058833 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.0 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.71428571429 5.45110844103 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0796068958916 0.236089414692 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0259397320452 0.076458572812 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.03032291863 0.0737576698707 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0464692355244 0.150856017488 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00811653525392 0.0645574589148 13% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.82 10.9000537634 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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