TPO27-Little Ice age
The lecture and the passage discuss the reason of the little ice age.Although the passage claims that there are three theories for occuring this phenomena, the speaker refutes these ideas through a number of reasons which will be described in this report.
First of all, the passage points out that the augment of the warm weather which had been happend privous period has caused the disruption of ocean current, which has effected the earth's climate. The speaker, in contrast, rejects this by claimin that on those period a sudden cooling either in Europe or America and have been discoverd by the scientists. As a result, this sudden cooling cannot explain by the warmer period.
Furthermore, unlike the passage which states that the activity of volcanics and the large amount of their eruption could create a dust cloud which can block the sunlight; therefore, the temprature could decrease, the speaker argues that the eruption of the volcanic could create enough dust. She also mentions that a large amount of dust could create some visual effects which can be determined by the others easily, whereas there are no evidence of these visual effect, like colorful sunlight, on the reports. So, these eruptions was not strong enough to effete the climate.
Finally, although the passage says that decreasing of the human population caused to increase the forests; thus, the increasing of the carbon dioxide by the forests resulting to decrease of green house and the earth temperature as well, the professor disagrees by mentioning that diminish of the human population was fairly quickly and there was not enough time for grow a large number of trees. Hence, the number of the forests was not large enough to cooling the climate.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 70, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Although
...iscuss the reason of the little ice age.Although the passage claims that there are three...
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Line 1, column 141, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...t there are three theories for occuring this phenomena, the speaker refutes these id...
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Line 3, column 43, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...rst of all, the passage points out that the augment of the warm weather which had been happ...
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Line 3, column 180, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'earths'' or 'earth's'?
Suggestion: earths'; earth's
...f ocean current, which has effected the earths climate. The speaker, in contrast, reje...
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Line 7, column 372, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
... and there was not enough time for grow a large number of trees. Hence, the number of the forests...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, furthermore, hence, so, therefore, thus, well, whereas, in contrast, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.4613686534 96% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 5.04856512141 158% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 12.0772626932 116% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 22.412803532 80% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 30.3222958057 112% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1457.0 1373.03311258 106% => OK
No of words: 287.0 270.72406181 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07665505226 5.08290768461 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.04702891845 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41350512342 2.5805825403 94% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 145.348785872 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533101045296 0.540411800872 99% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 419.366225166 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.25165562914 240% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 13.0662251656 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 21.2450331126 146% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 106.221757321 49.2860985944 216% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 161.888888889 110.228320801 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.8888888889 21.698381199 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.8888888889 7.06452816374 182% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 4.19205298013 119% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.27373068433 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325757905209 0.272083759551 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120899542322 0.0996497079465 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0397116893268 0.0662205650399 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167045792657 0.162205337803 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0179060297441 0.0443174109184 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.4 13.3589403974 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 53.8541721854 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.0289183223 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.78 12.2367328918 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.42419426049 112% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 63.6247240618 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 10.7273730684 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.498013245 137% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.2008830022 161% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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