TPO.28
The article states about some evidences toward migration of Edmontosaur dinosaurs from north to south in winter of one hundred million years ago and provides three reasons of support. However the professor in the lecture casts serious doubt on the passage by using a number of points that are contrary to each of the author's reasons.
First of all, the reading claims that there were not enough plants for Edmontosaur dinosaurs and they must have migrated in order to find a better place. In contrast, the professor refutes this point by saying that it is not convincing. He mentions that it is not related to finding food because the weather was warmer than today and we have evidences about peak of sun was so hot in summer than today.
On another hand, the article posits that Edmontosaur dinosaurs have lived in herd and so they migrate all together. However, the teacher describes that living in form of herd does not mean migration. According to the teacher other animals like Rezevo have lived at that time in the US in form of herd without migration.
Finally, the reading makes it clear that Edmontosaur dinosaurs were physically capable of migrating. Conversely, the lecturer opposes this point by explaining that juveniles of this form of dinosaurs have not capable of migration to distant areas. We also learn that juveniles cannot survive on their own.
The article states about some evidences toward migration of Edmontosaur dinosaurs from north to south in winter of one hundred million years ago
The article states about some evidences toward the migration of Edmontosaur dinosaurs from north to south in winter one hundred million years ago
and we have evidences about peak of sun was so hot in summer than today.
Description: two verbs in one sentence. can you re-write this sentence?
juveniles of this form of dinosaurs have not capable of
juveniles of this form of dinosaurs are not capable of
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No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
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Score: 21 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 11 12
No. of Words: 231 250
No. of Characters: 1116 1200
No. of Different Words: 133 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.899 4.2
Average Word Length: 4.831 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.429 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 81 80
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 65 60
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 34 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 26 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 21 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.967 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.818 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.365 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.64 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.142 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4