Tpo36-integrated
The article states that cloud seeding by chemical like silver iodied is a very useful method to prevent hailing and increasing other percipitate like rain and snow instead and provides three reason of support. In the other hand, the professor siad that this results are not clear and oposes each reasons in the article.
First, the article avers that laboratory results support this theory which clood seeeding will decrease the hail formation and increase the chance of rain and snow. However, the lecturer argues this by explaining that this results have came from laboratory experiments. there is not guarentte that those will happen in the real situation. she asserts that this silver iodied can decrease not only the hail formatiion, but also it can prefvvent the rain and snow formation and finally cause drought and lack of water.
Second, the article brought somoe evidance from urban areas from asia to support her theory. In contrast, the professor opposes this and explained that these results may not be repearted in usa. she adds that there is some differences betwen the climate and weather situation in polluted urban area in asia and clean farmland in usa. she believs that pullution particle in the cities are good startere for cloud seeding. she asserts that this may not work in this clean area.
Third, the article adds some local studies results to its supportive evidances. it says that thes silver iodied seeding can protect the crop in the field. On the other hand, the professor believes that in these locla area they did nort included the nieberhooh of them and there ara some natural weather variation which can attribute to the results.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... oposes each reasons in the article. First, the article avers that laboratory...
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...is by explaining that this results have came from laboratory experiments. there is n...
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... have came from laboratory experiments. there is not guarentte that those will happen...
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...hose will happen in the real situation. she asserts that this silver iodied can dec...
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...lly cause drought and lack of water. Second, the article brought somoe evidan...
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...se results may not be repearted in usa. she adds that there is some differences bet...
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... not be repearted in usa. she adds that there is some differences betwen the climate and weather situatio...
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...ther situation in polluted urban area in asia and clean farmland in usa. she beli...
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...es results to its supportive evidances. it says that thes silver iodied seeding ca...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, may, second, so, third, in contrast, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.4613686534 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 5.04856512141 158% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 7.30242825607 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 12.0772626932 116% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 22.412803532 147% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 30.3222958057 92% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1393.0 1373.03311258 101% => OK
No of words: 278.0 270.72406181 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01079136691 5.08290768461 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.04702891845 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3009776649 2.5805825403 89% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 145.348785872 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539568345324 0.540411800872 100% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 419.366225166 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0662251656 107% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 21.2450331126 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.004729784 49.2860985944 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5 110.228320801 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8571428571 21.698381199 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.71428571429 7.06452816374 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 4.19205298013 310% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 4.33554083885 208% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.272083759551 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.0996497079465 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0662205650399 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.162205337803 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0443174109184 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.3589403974 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 53.8541721854 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.0289183223 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.2367328918 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.42419426049 104% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 63.6247240618 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.498013245 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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