TPO40 integrated
Recently there has been a ton of debate on the possibility of life on Mars and Venus. More specifically, in regards to the reading passage, the writer puts forth the idea that the human life is likely to be possible on the Mars or the Moon rather than Venus. In the listening passage, the speaker is quick enough to point out that there are several flaws in his claim. In fact, the professor believes that human life could be possible on Venus by building a floating station around fifty kilometers above the surface, and addresses, in detail, the trouble with each point made in the reading text.
First and foremost, the author of the text passage claims that the extreme atmospheric pressure at the Venus surface would crush anything that lands on it. However, the speaker in the lecture, stands in firm opposition of the fact. The professor states that as the pressure of the atmosphere decreases with increase in height, a station at a height of fifty kilometers would be at a pressure equal to the earth. So, there will no possibility of crushing of any kind of spacecraft.
One group of experts, represented by the author, believes that there are no source of water in the Venus for the survival of humans. Of course, though, not all experts in the same field believe this is accurate. The lecturer posits that the chemical processing of the carbon di oxide and sulfuric acid could be used for the synthesis of water.
Finally, the author wraps up his argument stating that the sunlight available on the Venus is not sufficient for human survival. Not surprisingly, the speaker takes issue with this claim by contending that at the height of fifty kilometers above the surface, the clouds are not so thick and they can reflect the sunlight which can by captured by the solar collector and use as the fuel to produce electricity.
To sum up, both the author and the speaker hold conflicting views about the possibility of life on Venus. It’s clear that they will have trouble finding common ground on this issue.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 102, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , serif&apos
... life on mars and venus. Mor Roman',serif'>e specifically, in regards to the r...
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Line 1, column 134, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
...an',serif'>e specifically, in regards to the reading passage, the writer puts fo...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Text-align
...each point made in the reading text. text-align:justify;line-height:115%'>heigh...
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Line 3, column 97, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , serif
...;font-family:'Times New Roman',serif; mso-bidi-font-style:italic'> ...
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Line 3, column 141, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...if; mso-bidi-font-style:italic'> First and foremost, the author of the te...
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Line 3, column 563, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...ld be at a pressure equal to the earth. so, there will no possibility of crushing ...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Text-align
... crushing of any kind of spacecraft. text-align:justify;line-height:115%'>heigh...
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Line 5, column 97, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , serif
...;font-family:'Times New Roman',serif; mso-bidi-font-style:italic'> ...
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Line 5, column 141, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...if; mso-bidi-font-style:italic'> One group of experts, represented by the...
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Line 5, column 227, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'sources'?
Suggestion: sources
... the author, believes that there are no source of water in the venus for the survival ...
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Line 5, column 495, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...uld be used for the synthesis of water. text-align:justify;line-height:115%&apos...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Text-align
...e used for the synthesis of water. text-align:justify;line-height:115%'>heigh...
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Line 7, column 97, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , serif
...;font-family:'Times New Roman',serif; mso-bidi-font-style:italic'> ...
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Line 7, column 141, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...if; mso-bidi-font-style:italic'> Finally, the author wraps up his argumen...
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Line 7, column 471, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... thick and they can reflect the sunlight which can by captured by the solar colle...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Text-align
... as the fuel to produce electricity. text-align:justify;line-height:115%'>heigh...
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Line 9, column 97, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , serif
...;font-family:'Times New Roman',serif; mso-bidi-font-style:italic'> ...
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Line 9, column 141, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...if; mso-bidi-font-style:italic'> To sum up, both the author and the speak...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, if, so, in fact, kind of, of course, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.4613686534 115% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 5.04856512141 158% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 7.30242825607 110% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 12.0772626932 99% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 22.412803532 85% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 30.3222958057 201% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2262.0 1373.03311258 165% => OK
No of words: 370.0 270.72406181 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.11351351351 5.08290768461 120% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.04702891845 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 8.91623055306 2.5805825403 346% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 185.0 145.348785872 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.540411800872 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 658.8 419.366225166 157% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.55342163355 116% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 3.25607064018 0% => OK
Article: 12.0 8.23620309051 146% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 2.5761589404 233% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 21.2450331126 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 87.2978044779 49.2860985944 177% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.8 110.228320801 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6666666667 21.698381199 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.73333333333 7.06452816374 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 4.19205298013 429% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 4.33554083885 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 4.45695364238 179% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.27373068433 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177987453795 0.272083759551 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0790541797535 0.0996497079465 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0498543664761 0.0662205650399 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12133828036 0.162205337803 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0482353735496 0.0443174109184 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.7 13.3589403974 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 53.8541721854 56% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.0289183223 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 18.45 12.2367328918 151% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.42419426049 94% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 63.6247240618 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.7273730684 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.498013245 110% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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