tpo40.1
Both author and lecturer offer two opposing views on the possibility of the human's permanent maintain on the planet Venus. While the reading passage lists three obstacles for this action, the professor counters these specific points and mentions that although it is an arduous task to make it happen, it is feasible by the floated station on the atmosphere of the Venus, 50 km above its surface.
First of all, the article posits that for the sake of the high pressure of the atmosphere on the Venus' surface, anything might have landed on the Venus would have been crushed. However, the instructor challenges this claim. As he asserts, due to the fact that at high altitude, the pressure of atmosphere decreases, the 50 km above the Venus' atmosphere contains the pressure as equal to the pressure of the Erath's atmosphere. Therefore, there is no risk of crushing.
Second, the text mentions that as there is no reservoir of water and oxygen on the Venus, there is the requirement of the regular supply of the water and oxygen from the Earth, which defeats the purpose of the action. On the other hand, the lecturer dismisses the accuracy of this declaration for the sake of the other elements exist on the Venus. Based on her assertion, the Venus contains the huge amount of the carbon dioxide and sulfuric acid from which the oxygen and water can be derived. Consequently, there is no demand for the water and oxygen supplement from the Earth, and the station could provide the required amount of the water and oxygen.
Finally, the passage assumes that as there is a scanty amount of the sunlight on the Venus' surface, because of the thick atmosphere and dense layer of the carbon dioxide existence. The professor casts debates on this issue too. As he states, even though the location of the station is under the thick atmosphere, the thickness of the air in that spot is little than the Venus surface; thereby the people will have to the big portion of the sunlight. Besides, the station location leads the station gains advantages from the reflected sunlight by the layer of the carbon dioxide. The reflection of the sunlight by the thick carbon dioxide layer is useful for the generation of the electricity required for the machines.
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Discourse Markers used:
['besides', 'consequently', 'finally', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'second', 'so', 'therefore', 'while', 'first of all', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.294811320755 0.261695866417 113% => OK
Verbs: 0.0943396226415 0.158904122519 59% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0495283018868 0.0723426182421 68% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0212264150943 0.0435111971325 49% => Some adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.0165094339623 0.0277247811725 60% => OK
Prepositions: 0.162735849057 0.128828473217 126% => OK
Participles: 0.0212264150943 0.0370669169778 57% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.50120779437 2.5805825403 97% => OK
Infinitives: 0.00943396226415 0.0208969081088 45% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00154638098197 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.195754716981 0.128158765124 153% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0117924528302 0.0158828679856 74% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00707547169811 0.0114777025283 62% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2247.0 1645.83664459 137% => OK
No of words: 386.0 271.125827815 142% => OK
Chars per words: 5.82124352332 6.08160592843 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43248042346 4.04852973271 109% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.344559585492 0.374372842146 92% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.261658031088 0.287516216867 91% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.186528497409 0.187439937562 100% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0880829015544 0.113142543107 78% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50120779437 2.5805825403 97% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 145.348785872 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.450777202073 0.539623497131 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 47.4346903174 53.8517498576 88% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0529801325 115% => OK
Sentence length: 25.7333333333 21.7502111507 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.4038395067 49.3711431718 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.8 132.220823453 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7333333333 21.7502111507 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.8 0.878197800319 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 3.39072847682 0% => OK
Readability: 51.8991364421 50.5018328374 103% => OK
Elegance: 3.625 1.90840788429 190% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.705813914157 0.549887131256 128% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.209530933658 0.142949733639 147% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.13564458446 0.0787303798458 172% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.727884190409 0.631733273073 115% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.225559281585 0.139662658121 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.420239119022 0.266732575781 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.148692617743 0.103435571967 144% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.656287904825 0.414875509568 158% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0857504940079 0.0530846634433 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.587520420027 0.40443939384 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0458519702831 0.0528353158467 87% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.26048565121 94% => OK
Positive topic words: 2.0 3.49668874172 57% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 3.62251655629 110% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 3.1766004415 126% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 10.2958057395 97% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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