TPO46
In the lecture, the professor talked about the benefits of electronic records. she disputed the three advantages, and she cited the several reasons showing that electronic records are not as well as the passage claimed.
First, she said the reducing cost is not significant. There are still many paper records in a clinic, not just medical records. Moreover, most doctors still used to writing on paper instead of typing on computers.
Second, the professor said doctors used to handwriting in front of patients and thus did not prevent errors as the passage argued. The handwriting records would usually be entered by other staffs later, so the writing or transcribing errors still exist.
Third, the professor dismissed the passage's argument that aiding research would be easier and less expensive. she claimed that the researchers are still hard to get access to patients' medical records because of the privacy law. Under the law, they should get patients' agreements and the procedure is long and complicated.
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The opinions of celebrities, such as famous entertainers and athletes, are more important to younger people than they are to older people. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 73
- TPO46 63
- TPO32#1 65
- Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past. 66
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more important for governments to spend money to improve Internet access than to improve public transportation. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 66
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 80, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: She
...out the benefits of electronic records. she disputed the three advantages, and she ...
^^^
Line 7, column 36, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'passages'' or 'passage's'?
Suggestion: passages'; passage's
...t. Third, the professor dismissed the passages argument that aiding research would be ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 111, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: She
...rch would be easier and less expensive. she claimed that the researchers are still ...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, second, so, still, third, thus, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.4613686534 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 12.0772626932 25% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 22.412803532 36% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 30.3222958057 49% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 5.01324503311 20% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 862.0 1373.03311258 63% => OK
No of words: 163.0 270.72406181 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28834355828 5.08290768461 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 4.04702891845 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62330025765 2.5805825403 102% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 145.348785872 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59509202454 0.540411800872 110% => OK
syllable_count: 252.9 419.366225166 60% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 4.0 8.23620309051 49% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 13.0662251656 77% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 21.2450331126 75% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.5518360947 49.2860985944 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 86.2 110.228320801 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3 21.698381199 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.9 7.06452816374 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.334146306971 0.272083759551 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121919189574 0.0996497079465 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0798434235627 0.0662205650399 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186789051653 0.162205337803 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0327128258246 0.0443174109184 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.3589403974 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 53.8541721854 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.0289183223 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.2367328918 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.42419426049 107% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 63.6247240618 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.7273730684 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.498013245 80% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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