The article is about humpback whales and their ability to migrate. The passage explains that this ability is connected to stars, and provides three reasons of support. However, the professor believes that the humpback whales migration feature doesn't have a plausible connection to stars, and refutes each of the author's reasons.
First, the reading claims that this kind of whales have especial intelligent that enables them to navigate the way by stars. This point is challenged by the professor. He states that navigating by stars doesn't connected to animals intelligence; even though, those animals with this ability, such as some birds like ducks, do so based on their instinct. thus, connecting navigation through stars to intelligence is not appropriate.
Second, the author of reading posits that as hampback whales migrate in straight lines shows that they rely on stars at night in order to find their ways, because they need some external objects to follow. The professor, on the other hand, mentions that those animals that use objects to find their ways, actually send back and forth some signals that help them to do so. He elaborate on this point by saying that, as it is impossible to send a signal to stars and get the response, they probably use bio magnetic field to migrate in straight lines.
Finally, the author argues that hampback whales do spy-hopping to look at stars and navigate their path. The professor rebuts this point bay mentioning that this behavior is very rare among animals, and those who have this function, like sharks, use it to find their preys and hunting, not navigating. He also states that hampback whales do spy-hopping in the day, when the stars are not in the sky.
In conclusion, the professor effectively casts doubt on all the theories and claims presented in the article.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 244, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...t the humpback whales migration feature doesnt have a plausible connection to stars, a...
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Line 4, column 204, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...sor. He states that navigating by stars doesnt connected to animals intelligence; even...
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Line 4, column 354, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Thus
...e ducks, do so based on their instinct. thus, connecting navigation through stars to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, finally, first, however, look, second, so, thus, in conclusion, kind of, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.4613686534 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 5.04856512141 20% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 12.0772626932 132% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 22.412803532 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 30.3222958057 142% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.01324503311 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1534.0 1373.03311258 112% => OK
No of words: 304.0 270.72406181 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04605263158 5.08290768461 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.04702891845 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5287474591 2.5805825403 98% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 145.348785872 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.519736842105 0.540411800872 96% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 419.366225166 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 3.25607064018 184% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.25165562914 320% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.51434878587 198% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0662251656 107% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 21.2450331126 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.0057139592 49.2860985944 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.571428571 110.228320801 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7142857143 21.698381199 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.57142857143 7.06452816374 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 4.33554083885 231% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.327074489706 0.272083759551 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116150133631 0.0996497079465 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0678715869617 0.0662205650399 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16525914397 0.162205337803 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0846489789781 0.0443174109184 191% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.3589403974 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 53.8541721854 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.0289183223 93% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.2367328918 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.42419426049 100% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 63.6247240618 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.7273730684 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.498013245 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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