TPO54 salt level

Grammar and spelling errors:
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... reducing amount of the salt from lakes.The author of the reading feels that there ...
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... the condition to clear salt from water.The lecturer,on the other hand,utterly chal...
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... the condition to clear salt from water.The lecturer,on the other hand,utterly chal...
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...on to clear salt from water.The lecturer,on the other hand,utterly challenges claim...
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...rom water.The lecturer,on the other hand,utterly challenges claims made by the author.He...
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...ly challenges claims made by the author.He is of opinion that it is important to r...
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...lt from lake to save fish and birds life,but this methods arent realistic and practi...
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...om lake to save fish and birds life,but this methods arent realistic and practical. ...
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...ve fish and birds life,but this methods arent realistic and practical. To beg...
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...tic and practical. To begin with,The author argues that one way is to fill t...
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...ination facilities and then evaporate it,then salt and water will be separated,so we ...
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...it,then salt and water will be separated,so we can cool the steam down and return t...
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...steam down and return the water to lake.This specific argument is challenged by the ...
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... argument is challenged by the lecturer.He claims that if we evaporate water,the s...
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...rer.He claims that if we evaporate water,the salt remain in facility and we can fetc...
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...d we can fetch the water into lake again,but this method poses some problem.By doing...
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...gain,but this method poses some problem.By doing that some material remain in wate...
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...ved.if we bring the water back into lake,wind can distribute this harmful chemical ma...
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...te this harmful chemical material to air,so by breathing air people's health g...
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...apos;s health get damaged. Secondly,the writer suggests that dilute the the lev...
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...econdly,the writer suggests that dilute the the level of the salt by filling water to l...
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...econdly,the writer suggests that dilute the the level of the salt by filling water to l...
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...salt by filling water to lake from ocean,because oceans salt density is lower than lake....
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... oceans salt density is lower than lake.The lecturer,however,rebuts this by mention...
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... density is lower than lake.The lecturer,however,rebuts this by mentioning that although...
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...an reduce the salt density, it requires to build canals and pipelines to guide the water...
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... canals and pipelines to guide the water,and this operation is so expensive,so local...
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...water,and this operation is so expensive,so local government can't cope with i...
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...can't cope with it. Finally,the author states that we can divide lake i...
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... reduce the salt level in some portions.In contrast,the lecturer position that is ...
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... salt level in some portions.In contrast,the lecturer position that is method isn&ap...
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...thod isn't work for very long time.Because geologic activities like earthquake can...
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...es like earthquake can destroy the walls,as a result two part of water get combined...
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...ombined and salt level won't reduce,and it will back to first state.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, in contrast, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.4613686534 96% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 5.04856512141 178% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 7.30242825607 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 12.0772626932 75% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 22.412803532 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 30.3222958057 139% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.01324503311 120% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1531.0 1373.03311258 112% => OK
No of words: 290.0 270.72406181 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27931034483 5.08290768461 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.04702891845 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95363296321 2.5805825403 114% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 145.348785872 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565517241379 0.540411800872 105% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 419.366225166 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.25165562914 320% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.51434878587 264% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 13.0662251656 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 72.0 21.2450331126 339% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 99.147617218 49.2860985944 201% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 382.75 110.228320801 347% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 72.5 21.698381199 334% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 30.0 7.06452816374 425% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 34.0 4.19205298013 811% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 4.33554083885 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.27373068433 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172390421432 0.272083759551 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130949476858 0.0996497079465 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0537822791093 0.0662205650399 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130949476858 0.162205337803 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0537822791093 0.0443174109184 121% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 39.7 13.3589403974 297% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -1.6 53.8541721854 -3% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 5.55761589404 263% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 31.4 11.0289183223 285% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.53 12.2367328918 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.67 8.42419426049 139% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 63.6247240618 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 10.7273730684 266% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 30.8 10.498013245 293% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 15.0 11.2008830022 134% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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