TPO42- Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
In today’s world, there is a lot of tasks and jobs to do. Recently, there has been a hot debate on very notion that whether performing various type of tasks are well-enough and more satisfied for worker or accomplishing a similar task during the whole has tremendous effect on them. As far as I am concerned, I am holding the opinion that doing different kinds of jobs are better for workers. On the countless reasons and examples, I will present the most essential and conspicuous ones here.
To begin with, by doing different kinds of works, during workday, laborers could achieve a lot experience is different fields. But with doing repetitive thing all day long they can be expert just on single with, and it don’t work in today's community. My personal experience is compelling example of this. When I was in high school, I has been working in different firms such as software developing companies or electrical circuit producing enterprises and ect... As a result, I had gained a lot of precious experience through this works. My cousin, on the other hand, he worked just in one field and gained experience that was related to that job. The time passed away, the world economy become sophisticated and unreliable. Everyone have been losing their job, the jobs that one day they were expert on that. Unfortunately some of them didn't have other skill to work in other job. My cousin was one of them. He hadn’t other skill to rely on that and find another work. In contrast, I has gained lot of experience in different jobs, so I found another job quickly.
Last but not least, the other reason for performing different type of work is that workers don't get bored while doing work and keep them happy. But if they do same work all workdays, they get bored and tired and even depressed. For instance, my uncle had an ordinary job in government facility. He typed the letter in the computer and organized them based on the type of the letter. He has been working since 1980.every they he did the same thing.as a result, when he got retired, he was depressed and unsatisfied. He always said that I waste my whole life and he was not happy. Consequently; he got sick because of depression and died.
In conclusion, having considered the aforementioned reasons and examples into account, I do believe that working on different types of task during workday is more beneficial and satisfactory for workers. Not only they achieve more experience, but also they become happy and don’t tired.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 340, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[1]
Message: The pronoun 'I' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
...e of this. When I was in high school, I has been working in different firms such as...
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Line 5, column 843, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...ert on that. Unfortunately some of them didnt have other skill to work in other job. ...
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Line 5, column 996, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[1]
Message: The pronoun 'I' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
...t and find another work. In contrast, I has gained lot of experience in different j...
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Line 9, column 92, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... different type of work is that workers dont get bored while doing work and keep the...
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Line 9, column 516, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ired, he was depressed and unsatisfied. He always said that I waste my whole life ...
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Line 9, column 580, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Consequently,
...ste my whole life and he was not happy. Consequently; he got sick because of depression and ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, so, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 13.8261648746 181% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2090.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 433.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82678983834 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56165014514 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72390662233 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517321016166 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 646.2 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.3368900566 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.6 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.32 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.68 5.45110844103 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277487473797 0.236089414692 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0707530725069 0.076458572812 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0742828909865 0.0737576698707 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196813445043 0.150856017488 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0703475593463 0.0645574589148 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 11.7677419355 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 86.8835125448 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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