Tpo55-preventing from desertification
On one side, some people can not have a good communicate in person, and can not share their ideas with others, so they prefer to work in a project by sending e-mail. I firmly disagree with this view, and I prefer to work in a person because of some benefits.
For the beginning, Internet access is too weak, and using it has really difficult, sometimes if we want to download articles or video, we have to wait for a long time, so it takes our time and bothering. In addition, we just can connect to the net while we are using wi-fi. if we are out side the home, or on the vacation, we will not be able to connect to the net. besides, we just can check our email on laptop. These problems cause, we can not have a good approach to finish our project on time. For example, last year, when I wanted to send an e-mail to my professor about my discovered, I stayed at home and waited, finally after five hours the e-mail sent.
Additionally, I think, for every project, we need different points and ideas because every person has specific points of view and knowledge, so if team workers have disscusion with each other, they can use different ideas and share their knowledge for the better result. besides, sometimes we can give a special idea at the moment, and if time spends, we might forget some thing. so, by sending e-mail and problems which I mentioned, we can not have a good disscusion with our team work. so, in this case, our project does not have a good consequence. For instance, when I was a university student, I had four team workers, three times a week we got together, share our result and disscus about project, in mintime, we had fun time too. we could finish our project in time with good results.
As a result, because of some problems by sending e-mail and advantages of commuicate in person, I would prefer to work in person even problems of sending email will solve.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 275, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...ct to the net while we are using wi-fi. if we are out side the home, or on the vac...
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Line 13, column 285, Rule ID: CONFUSION_OF_OUR_OUT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'our'?
Suggestion: our
...net while we are using wi-fi. if we are out side the home, or on the vacation, we w...
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Line 13, column 285, Rule ID: OUT_SIDE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'outside'?
Suggestion: outside
...net while we are using wi-fi. if we are out side the home, or on the vacation, we will n...
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Line 13, column 367, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Besides
...will not be able to connect to the net. besides, we just can check our email on laptop....
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Line 13, column 664, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nally after five hours the e-mail sent. Additionally, I think, for every project...
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Line 19, column 272, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
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Suggestion: Besides
... their knowledge for the better result. besides, sometimes we can give a special idea a...
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Line 19, column 369, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[2]
Message: Did you mean 'something'?
Suggestion: something
...nt, and if time spends, we might forget some thing. so, by sending e-mail and problems whi...
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Line 19, column 381, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...ime spends, we might forget some thing. so, by sending e-mail and problems which I...
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Line 19, column 489, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...e a good disscusion with our team work. so, in this case, our project does not hav...
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Line 19, column 738, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...oject, in mintime, we had fun time too. we could finish our project in time with g...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, finally, if, really, so, while, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.4613686534 48% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 5.04856512141 277% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 14.0 7.30242825607 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 12.0772626932 25% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 42.0 22.412803532 187% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 30.3222958057 145% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1574.0 1373.03311258 115% => OK
No of words: 348.0 270.72406181 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52298850575 5.08290768461 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.04702891845 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4144840281 2.5805825403 94% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 145.348785872 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.491379310345 0.540411800872 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 488.7 419.366225166 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 3.25607064018 553% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 8.23620309051 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.25165562914 399% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 1.51434878587 330% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 2.5761589404 233% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 21.2450331126 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.3928058531 49.2860985944 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.933333333 110.228320801 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2 21.698381199 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.73333333333 7.06452816374 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 4.19205298013 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.272083759551 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.0996497079465 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0662205650399 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.162205337803 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0443174109184 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.3589403974 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 53.8541721854 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.0289183223 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 12.2367328918 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.42419426049 90% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 63.6247240618 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.7273730684 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.498013245 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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