Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Teacher were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they were nowadays.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
TPO41
The question of whether teachers more valued in the past or not, has always been controvesial topic among people with different points of view.
On one side some people are strongly convinced teachers in the past were appreciade than now. On the other side, some people make opposite point, and they believe now they are more valuable. In my opinion, teachers are hard working, and they are living in a difficult situation, and I firmly assert the first view carries more weight, and I use following arguments to support my position.
first, in the past the population of people were less than now, and few people were knowledgable. also, there did not use to be as many teachers as now, so all students respected them, and they listened to teachers carefuly. In addition, they had civili behaviro toward them. also, parents truthed and respected teachers too. For instance, on teacher's day, some gifts were given to them by parents, and I remember buying gift was too important to students and parents .Unfortunately, todays most students do not listen to teachers carefuly because I think they have become rude, and do not have a good behavior toward teachers. also, teacher's day is not important to them, and most of the time they forget it. Generally speaking, I believe in the past teachers were appreciated by society.
Second, in the past, teachers got high salary, but now low salary is given to them, and I think by increasing the number of teachers, the government does not have enough budjet.
my father is a teacher, he has been teaching since I was born, I remeber when I was a child he was satisfied with his job because all students respected him, so he could teach them with good behaviors, but nowadays he is not satisfied, and whenever he comes back home he is nerves because most of the time he had punnish students in the school. In addition, he does not have a good salary, so he is going to be retired.
All in all, although I know that, teachers have a difficult life specially thesedays, I have always wanted to become a teacher like my father, and I think I have to practice to become more pasiont.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHETHER[3]
Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: Whether; The question whether
The question of whether teachers more valued in the past or not...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: First
... arguments to support my position. first, in the past the population of people w...
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Line 9, column 99, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Also
... now, and few people were knowledgable. also, there did not use to be as many teache...
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Line 9, column 119, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
... were knowledgable. also, there did not use to be as many teachers as now, so all s...
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Line 9, column 277, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Also
..., they had civili behaviro toward them. also, parents truthed and respected teachers...
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Line 9, column 344, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'teachers'' or 'teacher's'?
Suggestion: teachers'; teacher's
...espected teachers too. For instance, on teachers day, some gifts were given to them by p...
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Line 9, column 468, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...as too important to students and parents .Unfortunately, todays most students do n...
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Line 9, column 470, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Unfortunately
... too important to students and parents .Unfortunately, todays most students do not listen to ...
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Line 9, column 629, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Also
...t have a good behavior toward teachers. also, teachers day is not important to them,...
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Line 17, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: My
...nment does not have enough budjet. my father is a teacher, he has been teachi...
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Line 21, column 166, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'practice becoming'.
Suggestion: practice becoming
...r like my father, and I think I have to practice to become more pasiont.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, as to, for instance, i think, in addition, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1774.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 375.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73066666667 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55772676848 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.493333333333 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 548.1 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 14.0 1.86738351254 750% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 85.4560055753 48.9658058833 175% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.266666667 100.406767564 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.6045352989 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.45110844103 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209844717054 0.236089414692 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0873136232624 0.076458572812 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.057168581994 0.0737576698707 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106129322317 0.150856017488 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0704243451368 0.0645574589148 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 11.7677419355 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.45 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.5 Out of 30
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