Weakness of English language among students in Yemen

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Weakness of English language among students in Yemen

English language is deemed to be a fundamental requirement of the modern era.Therefore, Governments must spend much money and place a great bugdet in order to acheive a good education in English language for the students.
Moreover, It is an international language that connects the world and opens horizons in different fields of life.

In Yemen, people are not seriously taking care of English language which due to a miserable level in English language .
Consequently, Many reasons can cause such a major problem, like :
1- Lack of real interest and misconcept of some families.
2- Absence of the role of the ministry of education.

In order to execute this problem, government-in cooperation with the ministry of education-must :

1- Establish intensive courses in English language- in the summer vacation- for the students.
2- Oraganize competitions in best English speaker.
3-Teach English language from early stages -from the first year of the elementary school or even from the KG- and pay attention to renewing the curriculum.

In conclusion, I believe that this problem must be taken into consideration from those who have the authority and the power to make a change.

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2021-11-13 Abdalluh Saleh Omer Barakat 76 view
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, if, moreover, so, therefore, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.4613686534 48% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 12.0772626932 33% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 22.412803532 31% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 30.3222958057 112% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.01324503311 199% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1016.0 1373.03311258 74% => OK
No of words: 189.0 270.72406181 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37566137566 5.08290768461 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 4.04702891845 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09189057478 2.5805825403 120% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 145.348785872 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.640211640212 0.540411800872 118% => OK
syllable_count: 311.4 419.366225166 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 0.0 8.23620309051 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 13.0662251656 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 21.2450331126 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.9480774609 49.2860985944 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.888888889 110.228320801 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 21.698381199 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06452816374 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 11.0 4.09492273731 269% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 4.19205298013 143% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251269730449 0.272083759551 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0984190663917 0.0996497079465 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101873725143 0.0662205650399 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0853618356803 0.162205337803 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102068848091 0.0443174109184 230% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.3589403974 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.8541721854 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.0289183223 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.2367328918 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.42419426049 104% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 63.6247240618 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.7273730684 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.498013245 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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