The reading and the lecture are both about hydraulic power which is extraction of natural gas from shell rock deep underground. the author of the reading believes that hydraulic fracturing advantages are more than its drawbacks. The lecture casts doubt about the claims made in the article. She says that it is a dangerous way that can threat f humans’ life.
At the first, the author of the reading points out that the level of economic boom that is gained by the hydraulic fracturing is high. It is mentioned that the hydraulic fracturing influences on economic by providing more job vacancies and increasing the domestic production which leads to the price decreases up to 50%. This point is challenged by the lecture. She says the extracting natural gas from shell rocks causes to raise the price for consumers. Furthermore, she argues that hydraulic fracturing Has a lot of negative influences that can be hazardous.
Secondly, the author contends that hydraulic fracturing is Perfectly safe. The article notes that the ranging of radioactive don’t get larger than before. The lecture rebuts this agreement. She states hydraulic fracturing has negative effect on humans’ healthy and the level of some radioactive elements such as Radium and Uranium will be grow. Mentioned factors can increase the different types of cancers between people because it has directed effect on ground waters.
Finally, the author states that the amount of energy that produced by hydraulic fracturing is more than another sources of energy. The article establishes that the level of earned energy by hydraulic fracturing is 70% more than another natural sources of energy. The lecture, on the other hand, posits that hydraulic fracturing wastes the floor and the probability of earth quick will be increased up to 70%. She puts forth the idea that the usage of natural energy sources like wind and solar is more efficient. The advantages of using clean sources are long term.
- Some people say that the best preparation for life is learning to be cooperative. Do others take the opposite view and say that learning to be competitive is the best preparation. Tell which one you agree with and explain why. 76
- “What recent news story has affected you the most? In what ways has it affected you? Use reasons and examples to support your response." 60
- “What recent news story has affected you the most? In what ways has it affected you? Use reasons and examples to support your response." 3
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...l gas from shell rock deep underground. the author of the reading believes that hyd...
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... mentioned that the hydraulic fracturing influences on economic by providing more...
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Suggestion: raising
...ing natural gas from shell rocks causes to raise the price for consumers. Furthermore, s...
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...re, she argues that hydraulic fracturing Has a lot of negative influences that ca...
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...uthor contends that hydraulic fracturing is Perfectly safe. The article notes tha...
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...reement. She states hydraulic fracturing has negative effect on humans' heal...
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...gy that produced by hydraulic fracturing is more than another sources of energy. ...
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...of earned energy by hydraulic fracturing is 70% more than another natural sources...
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...antages of using clean sources are long term.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.4613686534 153% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 5.04856512141 99% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 12.0772626932 141% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 22.412803532 116% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 30.3222958057 132% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1662.0 1373.03311258 121% => OK
No of words: 321.0 270.72406181 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17757009346 5.08290768461 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.04702891845 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69192769298 2.5805825403 104% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 145.348785872 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.489096573209 0.540411800872 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 506.7 419.366225166 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 3.25607064018 215% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 11.0 8.23620309051 134% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 13.0662251656 145% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 21.2450331126 75% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.3057566189 49.2860985944 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.4736842105 110.228320801 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8947368421 21.698381199 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.52631578947 7.06452816374 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 4.19205298013 215% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 4.33554083885 277% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0348271352222 0.272083759551 13% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0138381239639 0.0996497079465 14% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0293572664638 0.0662205650399 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0262837738973 0.162205337803 16% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0219472681519 0.0443174109184 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.3589403974 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 53.8541721854 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.0289183223 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.2367328918 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.42419426049 93% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 63.6247240618 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.498013245 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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