Will American wood companies go eco-friendly
There are three arguments made in the passage that why American wood companies will not try to get a eco-certification. The Lecturer disagrees with the passage and gives specific reasons for each of the statements.
For the first reason mentioned in the passage, lecturer argues that American people don't treat all advertisments the same way in neglect. He believes if saying in the advertisment is supported by a known agency, peple will pay attention to it.
As for the second idea in the passage, saying that the increse in price of products with eco-certification will result in loss of costumers, the lecturer disagrees and says acording to a recent study, price is major criteria for choosing between two products if their price differs significantly. But if they only have five percent difference, people might choose the eco friendly products.
The final reason given in the passage is that since most American wood companies sell their product inside America, it does not make sence to get an eco-certification. That is mostly because american consumers are happy the way everything is. However the lecturer believes that if the companies applied for an eco-certifiacation, they would have much more costumer market.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 100, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ican wood companies will not try to get a eco-certification. The Lecturer disagre...
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Line 3, column 85, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...e, lecturer argues that American people dont treat all advertisments the same way in...
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Line 7, column 244, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...sumers are happy the way everything is. However the lecturer believes that if the compa...
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Line 7, column 352, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'costumer' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: costumer
...co-certifiacation, they would have much more costumer market.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, second, so, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.4613686534 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 5.04856512141 99% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 7.30242825607 41% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 12.0772626932 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 22.412803532 58% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 30.3222958057 69% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1037.0 1373.03311258 76% => OK
No of words: 198.0 270.72406181 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23737373737 5.08290768461 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 4.04702891845 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13082840823 2.5805825403 121% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 145.348785872 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60101010101 0.540411800872 111% => OK
syllable_count: 328.5 419.366225166 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.55342163355 109% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 3.0 8.23620309051 36% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 13.0662251656 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 21.2450331126 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.6337581047 49.2860985944 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.222222222 110.228320801 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 21.698381199 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.77777777778 7.06452816374 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288322501765 0.272083759551 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116457748264 0.0996497079465 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103827731187 0.0662205650399 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16678202077 0.162205337803 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0735058482513 0.0443174109184 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.3589403974 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 53.8541721854 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.0289183223 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.2367328918 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.42419426049 101% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 63.6247240618 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.498013245 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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