working in a group or individually is better
Many organizations belive in teamwork rather than to relying on a single person to concur a task.There are many aspects of teamwork that turn out be beneficial for the organization.But in some cases,these traits overpower one another creating problems amongst team members.
A group of individuals will discuss ideas and solutions to overcome problems. Teamwork provides a quicker and more creative response rate. But sometimes a certain team member may take more time to agree upon the idea. In a group there are certain influencers who take a higher stand on making decisions and finding solutions. Whereas, in a team everyone takes equal responsibility for acievement or failure. Furthermore, recongnition is given to a team and no individual is recongnised specifically which causes a negative impact on team members.The overall conclusion weighs the difference based on how teamwork is effective yet has some flaws when it comes to tackling organisational projects.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: There
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Suggestion: But
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, may, so, whereas, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.4613686534 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 7.30242825607 110% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 12.0772626932 33% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 3.0 22.412803532 13% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 30.3222958057 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 821.0 1373.03311258 60% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 151.0 270.72406181 56% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43708609272 5.08290768461 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.50545371207 4.04702891845 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2478971008 2.5805825403 126% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 145.348785872 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.715231788079 0.540411800872 132% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 419.366225166 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.55342163355 116% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 2.0 8.23620309051 24% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 13.0662251656 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 21.2450331126 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 91.0570576897 49.2860985944 185% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.285714286 110.228320801 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5714285714 21.698381199 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.57142857143 7.06452816374 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.09492273731 49% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.27373068433 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0908133079063 0.272083759551 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0501595558249 0.0996497079465 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.075706882733 0.0662205650399 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0569153317782 0.162205337803 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0569153317782 0.0443174109184 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.3589403974 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 53.8541721854 62% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.0289183223 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.2367328918 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.43 8.42419426049 124% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 63.6247240618 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.7273730684 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.498013245 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted. The correct pattern:
para 1: introduction
para 2: doubt 1
para 3: doubt 2
para 4: doubt 3
Less contents wanted from the reading passages(25%), more content wanted from the lecture (75%).
Don't need a conclusion paragraph.
Read sample essays from ETS:
http://www.testbig.com/users/toeflwritingmaster
More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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