young people enjoy more than the older. Therefore, I agree with this statement that young people enjoy life more than older people do
I do not have doubt that many olders people enjoy much the life, however I also do not have doubt that young people enjoy more than the older. Therefore, I agree with this statement that young people enjoy life more than older people do. Thus, I have two reasons to support my opinions.
First, young people usually have more energy to do the things if compared with olders people. The corage, is a thing that the teenager have a lot, and this is a tool that increase the wish of then enjoy the life. For example, I and my friends were talking with our parents and we were comparing our life’s. We started talking about the courage of the people have to do the radical sports, and all of us that were young have courage to do, and only on mother said that had corage. They told us when they were more youngest they had corage, however today is not. Thus whith this meet I could percived that is of nature of young people.
Second, the tecnology have encouraged the young people do things that make than enjoy the life. Since that have many places that are paradisiac and beatiful that can be observed in the Internet for the mobile, tablet and computer. This make young people try to travel to these places. For instance, the number of backpacker have increase in the world, in these people are young people. I read in a news peaper that young people have enjoyed the life travelling, and how many people don't have enough money to travel they created a lot websites to help each other. In the interview that i read in a section in a newspaper, it was saying that there are some websites that you work in a place like a hostel and you can live to enjoy the place. The website have work to backpackers oround the world.
In conclusion, I agree with this statement and I think that young people have enjoyed the life more than older, and that the tecnology have help the young tpeople to enjoy it.
- government should offer college and university education free of charge to all students 60
- TPO-03 - Independent Writing TaskDo you agree or disagree with the following statement?It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 70
- government should offer college and university education free of charge to all students 50
- university need encourage their students to choose filds of study that will prepare them for lucrative careers 50
- College students should be encouraged to pursue subjects that interest them rather than the courses that seem most likely to lead to jobs.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain y 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 514, Rule ID: MOST_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use only 'youngest' (without 'more') when you use the superlative.
Suggestion: youngest
...had corage. They told us when they were more youngest they had corage, however today is not. ...
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Line 3, column 567, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
... they had corage, however today is not. Thus whith this meet I could percived that i...
^^^^
Line 5, column 144, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hat have many places that are paradisiac and beatiful that can be observed in the...
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Line 5, column 484, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...he life travelling, and how many people dont have enough money to travel they create...
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Line 5, column 587, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... help each other. In the interview that i read in a section in a newspaper, it wa...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, second, so, then, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, talking about
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.4613686534 124% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 7.30242825607 151% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 12.0772626932 157% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 22.412803532 228% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 30.3222958057 112% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1562.0 1373.03311258 114% => OK
No of words: 351.0 270.72406181 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.45014245014 5.08290768461 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.04702891845 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.1394095536 2.5805825403 83% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 145.348785872 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.438746438746 0.540411800872 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 491.4 419.366225166 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 3.25607064018 307% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 8.23620309051 49% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.51434878587 330% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 13.0662251656 130% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 21.2450331126 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.436148102 49.2860985944 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.8823529412 110.228320801 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6470588235 21.698381199 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.35294117647 7.06452816374 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 4.19205298013 119% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 4.33554083885 277% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 4.45695364238 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.562825027752 0.272083759551 207% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.226585824258 0.0996497079465 227% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.255804390093 0.0662205650399 386% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.466176716923 0.162205337803 287% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.201369553402 0.0443174109184 454% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.3589403974 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 53.8541721854 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.0289183223 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.53 12.2367328918 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.19 8.42419426049 85% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 63.6247240618 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.7273730684 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.498013245 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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