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Essay topics:

ZOO

<span style="font-size: 19.36px;">The lecture mainly contradicts the information given in the reading passage stating that&nbsp;the zoos are the essential one to the modern culture and provides adequate education, whereas the lecture says that the zoos are only good for entertainment rather than the education.&nbsp;There are various points

discussed in the lecture to cast the doubts in the reading passage.

&nbsp;Firstly the speaker tells about&nbsp;the animal safety.&nbsp;The speaker says that&nbsp;the death of red panther arises a question about the safety,&nbsp;whereas the author has mentioned in the passage that&nbsp;the animals are treated well.&nbsp;The lecture says about&nbsp;the treatment is not pretty and as a result the panthers die and this has raised a question about the treatment&nbsp;mentioned in the reading passage,&nbsp;also this questions the responsibility of the caretaker in the zoos.

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Secondly, lecture says that&nbsp;the zoos gives the good entertainment rather than the education.&nbsp;The author has mentioned in the passage that&nbsp;the zoos provide education,&nbsp;but the speaker says that&nbsp;the visitors in the zoos are entertained by the artificial facts and the misleading exibits.

Thirdly, the lecture says that&nbsp;the endangered species is problematic.Although the author given an example to state that&nbsp;the endangered species plays a vital function,&nbsp;the speaker tells that&nbsp;the zoos

have no distinct advantage by saving endangered species.</span><br>

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...cation. There are various points discussed in the lecture to cast the doubts in th...
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...nther arises a question about the safety, whereas the author has mentioned in the...
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...nt mentioned in the reading passage, also this questions the responsibility ...
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Suggestion: , &nbsp
...age that the zoos provide education, but the speaker says that the visi...
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Suggestion: Although
...p;the endangered species is problematic.Although the author given an example to state th...
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...ndangered species plays a vital function, the speaker tells that the zoos ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, whereas, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.4613686534 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 5.04856512141 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 7.30242825607 68% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 22.412803532 54% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 30.3222958057 63% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.01324503311 239% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1343.0 1373.03311258 98% => OK
No of words: 205.0 270.72406181 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.5512195122 5.08290768461 129% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 4.04702891845 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.57510528188 2.5805825403 177% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 145.348785872 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521951219512 0.540411800872 97% => OK
syllable_count: 362.7 419.366225166 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.55342163355 116% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 3.25607064018 0% => OK
Article: 16.0 8.23620309051 194% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 13.0662251656 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 51.0 21.2450331126 240% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 85.9912786275 49.2860985944 174% => OK
Chars per sentence: 335.75 110.228320801 305% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 51.25 21.698381199 236% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 23.75 7.06452816374 336% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.09492273731 147% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 4.19205298013 143% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.27373068433 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132618525387 0.272083759551 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124723220421 0.0996497079465 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0888858809875 0.0662205650399 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0909906157054 0.162205337803 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10153867256 0.0443174109184 229% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 35.0 13.3589403974 262% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 2.79 53.8541721854 5% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 5.55761589404 263% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.5 11.0289183223 231% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 21.6 12.2367328918 177% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.71 8.42419426049 127% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 63.6247240618 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 10.7273730684 266% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 22.4 10.498013245 213% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 22.0 11.2008830022 196% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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