You have bought a mobile phone in a tax-free shop just a few days ago,and it doesn't work properly.
Write a letter to the manager to complain about it and ask him to solve the problem.
Dear Sir/Madam,
The reason I am writing to you is poor quality of a mobile phone, which I bought in your shop two weeks ago.After only two times it was in use, problems started to appear.
The first malfunction that I noticed was battery back-up that demanded extra time to charge full.when my husband asked me to click his photographs then I pushed the 'flash light' button on. It got stuck and we were unable to use since.I was very surprised to discover that much problems in a quite expensive model.
Naturally, I returned the mobile phone to shop to be replaced by new one. Your assistant...
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Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
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No. of Different Words: 113 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.627 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.341 4.6
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No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 30 50
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No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 11 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
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Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.155 0.07
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