After leaving school or university, young people should choose a job or career that they love, rather than one that pays the best salary. To what extent do you agree with this statement?
Deciding to work for interest or money has always been a matter of concern. While some people favour the view of obtaining the job with high paid, others, myself included , believe differently.
Following the career of interest is very essential for students. Firstly, people are likely to become successful if they can work in their favourite profession. In facts, this has been a popular advice from many successful people. They believe that working in the area of interest would give people a strong motivation and determination to overcome many difficulties, which are main factors to success. Secondly, it would be more enjoyable to work for the desirable job. People would feel more motivated to work hard as well as strike to develop and sharpen their skills, leading to more a meaningful life. Reports have shown that people who work for their favourite profession are likely to feel happier compared to people who choose to work for other reasons.
Nevertheless, some people insist that choosing the well-paid job is a better option. Their belief is that the monetary factor plays an important role in defining the success of a person. People with high paid jobs are generally well-respected and regarded as success. However, unlike the choice of following the profession of interest, having a high paid job does not guarantee a high job satisfaction. Furthermore, over the time, people who choose to follow their career of interest would make a high earning since companies would try to retain them with a higher salary and attractive incentives. Not surprisingly, many people who are in high positions choose to leave and follow their heart to work in the profession of their interest.
In conclusion, it is clear that some benefits of choosing the profession of interest may not be available in the option for money. Thus, students are advised to follow their heart when deciding to work.
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