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67. In order for a business to succeed, it must put more money in advertising.
Advertisements play important roles in increasing people's demands for products. Therefore, many manufacturers have strong tendency to introduce their products by this approach which enables them to make huge profit. Although some people are of the opinion that since people have been more well-informed, they have been refusing purachasing such advertised items, I believe that it is a wise decision for producers to employ advertising so that they can be more successful for the following reasons.
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Sentence: Although some people are of the opinion that since people have been more well-informed, they have been refusing purachasing such advertised items, I believe that it is a wise decision for producers to employ advertising so that they can be more successful for the following reasons.
Error: purachasing Suggestion: purchasing
Sentence: They know that if a company tries to produce low-quality products while showing exaggerated quality of that product, being punished by govenment authorities would be the consequence of such dishonest behaviors.
Error: govenment Suggestion: government
Sentence: In contrast, due to lack of suprvising by governments, people in the past, did not rely on the advertised products.
Error: suprvising Suggestion: supervising
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No. of Words: 392 350
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No. of Different Words: 232 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.45 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.352 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.966 2.4
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No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 95 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 57 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 23.059 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.283 7.5
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