Write a report describing the information in the graph below
This bar graph depicts numbers of computers and internet in the countries of Arab World,such as Egypt,Jordan,Oman, Syria and so on,as indicated on the x- axis. The y-axis illustrates computers and internet per 1000 inhabitants from 0 to 400.
By looking this graph, you can say,In Egypt and Morocco computers and internet less than other countries,each of them equal,around 10 computers and 10 internet for per 1000 inhabitants. Jordan and Oman also, similar,for each country computers equal to approximately 40 and internet equal to around 45 for per 1000 inhabitants.In S.Arabia and Syria computers more than internet. The most developed country for computers and internet section is UAE where amount of computer over 150 for per 1000 resident and internet approximately 340 for per 1000 resident. This is also greater than sum of internet in rest eight countries for per 1000 inhabitants.
This bar graph predicates most Arabic Countries computers and internet used a small size. UAE differ this countries because, this country more developed than others.
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This bar graph depicts numbers of computers and internet
This bar graph depicts the numbers of computers and internet
In Egypt and Morocco computers and internet less than other countries
In Egypt and Morocco computers and internet are less than that in other countries
for each country computers equal to approximately 40
for each country computers are equal to approximately 40
computers more than internet
computers are more than internet
where amount of computer over 150
where the mount of computers is over 150
This bar graph predicates most Arabic Countries computers and internet used a small size
This bar graph predicates that in most Arabic Countries computers and internet used in a small size
Sentence: UAE differ this countries because, this country more developed than others.
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